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Murray

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He was a lovely man.

A well-trimmed white moustache

and wrinkled weatherbeaten face,

but laughlines around bright brown eyes.

Hands so gnarled and earthcracked

but true gardener's hands, capable of miracles.

 

His home was warm but dark inside

because the sparse sunlight was not wasted

but used to grow tomatoes on the windowsills,

and his strawberries were greatly envied.

A happy bachelor - 'nae strangers in the hoose'.

 

He had a velvety grey moggy,

and two hens, one white, one black

to guarantee his breakfast egg.

No summertime for him -

'It's nae God's time'.

 

He rode uphill to work on an ancient

creaking, paintless bicycle,

with clips tied round his corduroys.

A moleskin waistcoat for Sunday church,

the emblem of his profession.

 

He was a lovely man,

may he rest forever in a moleless garden.

 

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jennifer Malden

Thu 17th Jan 2019 14:26

Thanks to Ray, glad you thought it well potted! also to Martin and MC, nice to know someone is reading it! Also to Jon and Alan for the likes. Thanks to all

Jennifer

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raypool

Mon 14th Jan 2019 17:10

Lovely stuff, earthy yet sensitive, and lovingly described. Well potted Jennifer!

Ray

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Martin Elder

Sun 13th Jan 2019 23:19

There is something very warm and comforting in this piece without being overtly sugary. very nice
Love it

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 13th Jan 2019 17:56

?A very readable eulogy which would please its subject, I reckon.
I had a mental picture of him trimming his moustache with garden
shears. Whimsy pops up uninvited on occasions!

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jennifer Malden

Sun 13th Jan 2019 17:11

HI! Thanks for the likes AM - Adam - and dear Anya. He's a real person I was very fond of as a child. I felt sorry for the moles but gardeners have it in for them!

Jennifer

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