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Much mourned death of an umbrella pine

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Cosmos of a myriad creatures

furry, feathered and many-legg'ed

home haven and sanctuary.

Always beautiful in evergreen

silver bright in winter snow

sparkling brilliants after rain

deep resin-perfumed summer shade

for dogs, old lame men and children.

 

Heard them scheming wickedly

'Keeps the light out!'

'Needles clog the drains!'

'Roots push up the flagstones!'

'Resin spoils our cars!'

'Chop it down!'

The woodmen called in nick of time

and plotters admonished for not

respecting its beauty and great age.

 

But then it declined relentlessly

branches no longer aromatic green

its world of invisible tiny beings

left lost, homeless and astray.

Murdered by chemicals or witchery

or just the anguish of a broken heart

at such crass ungratefulness

for its many freely given gifts?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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◄ No Prozac

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 4th Feb 2019 15:43

Jennifer - the original reference to the Iron Press anthology was on
January 23rd and can be found still by returning to the news entries
for that month - look for the byline "Afresh, afresh, afresh".
Cheers
MC

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jennifer Malden

Mon 4th Feb 2019 15:06

Thanks Jon and Desmond! This really came about; when my grandaughter was going to school she heard the 'plotters,' ran home and they saved it,but after two or three years it did die. They suspected some kind of chemical poisoning. When you think how long it takes them to grow from a tiny shoot, it's criminal. These trees have pine nuts too, as you probably know, which are used for that lovely 'pesto' a green, mainly basil, pasta sauce. Tx again.
Jennifer

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Jon

Mon 4th Feb 2019 11:58

Hi Jennifer
Excellent poem... The trees take on an almost human form and by the end stanza I felt the sadness and the sorrow for these beautiful trees.
Nicely done
Jon

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jennifer Malden

Sun 3rd Feb 2019 20:25

Thanks Jon and Anya for the likes, and MCN for the kind comment
and suggestion. I couldn't find the details of the competition, but will look again.

Jennifer

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 3rd Feb 2019 16:17

This seems a likely submission for the proposed Iron Press
anthology about trees - see WOL News for details. There's
something profoundly sad about a dying or dead tree...In my
distant Devon childhood there was one such noble landmark
beside which was placed a bus stop because everyone knew
the location as "Big Tree". When it became beyond saving it
was transformed into a timber sculpture that stands as a reminder
of what it once was - with some imaginative carvings
decorating its very substantial remains..

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