coromandel
Don’t build me a coffin
of coromandel wood,
just leave me be.
No ormolu brass handles,
not for me.
No church, no pews, no prayers
and not that final curtain call.
Please.
Dress me in white lace
as for my wedding day.
Carry me to the meadow
and just let me lay.
Circle me with daisy chains
if you must
for there is nothing more to say
and all is dust.
You may forget my name
my voice my face
but maybe if you ever come
to this quiet place
to see the meadow where the daisies grow
blow a sweet kiss to me
and then I’ll know
that somewhere in your heart
there’s still a place
where you keep my name,
my voice, my face.
photo : Keith1999
Anthony Emmerson
Thu 27th May 2010 22:45
Hi Ann,
Apologies for not commenting on this earlier. You posted it when I was off-site for a while so I missed it; and only now (via a very circuitous route) have discovered it. You don't need to change anything in this, and I would second Banksy's comments - it's a beautiful poem, delicately and thoughtfully handled. If there were a riposte to Auden's "Funeral Blues" this would be it. The title draws the reader in (isn't Coromandel a fantastic word - in the same way that Timbuktu and Samarkand and Xanadu are?) There is only one thing wrong with this - I wish I'd written it!
Regards,
A.E.