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Hiding amongst the molecules

I hid behind the veil

waiting to surprise you

but you never appeared

so I melted into the fabric

and became a part of the universe

that is never more to be seen

a molecule among millions

I found my place and am happy there

faceless, indivisible, a cosmos

inside a myriad of stars

a silhouette inverted

a ghostly whisper of a dream

floating around in a whirlpool

of eternal teardrops.

Hiding

◄ Beyond this place

Gentle caress ►

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Jon Stainsby

Wed 13th Feb 2019 16:18

Thank you everyone for the likes.

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Jon Stainsby

Tue 12th Feb 2019 19:48

Po ?

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Jon Stainsby

Tue 12th Feb 2019 19:07

Thank you, Rich and Jennifer

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jennifer Malden

Tue 12th Feb 2019 18:05

Beautiful beautiful beautiful!

Jennifer

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Rich

Mon 11th Feb 2019 21:07

wonderful stuff, Jon. Really enjoyed this.

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Jon Stainsby

Mon 11th Feb 2019 20:47

Thank you so much, Anya. ?

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Jon Stainsby

Mon 11th Feb 2019 19:11

Thanks very much, Jason

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Jason Bayliss

Mon 11th Feb 2019 19:09

That is such a poignant piece of writing. Love it.

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Jon Stainsby

Mon 11th Feb 2019 18:59

Thanks, Mae ❤

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Mae Foreman

Mon 11th Feb 2019 18:57

Wow! Excellent piece Jon! I think you've found your style!?Bravo! I'd sure like to know how that feels one way!
Thank you ?
Mae

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Jon Stainsby

Mon 11th Feb 2019 18:46

Thanks, Keith, Brian and Paris.

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Jon Stainsby

Mon 11th Feb 2019 18:45

Thank you, Vautaw. ?

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Mon 11th Feb 2019 18:20

Love this one John. Thanks for sharing your soul songs. ?

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