there are electrons passing from my lips to yours
when we kiss
some infinite number of universes
dissolve between us in the warm spit of passion
and when I close my eyes and feel your tongue
ask such sweet questions it's like
it’s like
the most enormous thing
could not possibly mean less
and I can feel it now
it is the life that we live again as we die
and it is long and it is warm and it is easy
Stu,
profound with each line a gem.
Thanks, Keith
cheers guys. lovely comments as ever. meant to perform this last night and completely forgot about it. bugger.
When I read this sort of poem I feel it has experienced a birth and has a life unique of its own; I think your work is almost subconscious and springs feed it . In other words you inspire me Stu ! A real sense of the internalising of the close up here.
Ray
What a great opening line Stu. It really drew me in to another fabulous poem
nice one
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Stu Buck
Sun 14th Jul 2019 13:04
cheers keith! always nice to hear my work resonates with people. thats why we write i think