MOAN ALONE
Nose to tail grazing
cars sniff each other
like dogs on heat,
their owners restless, confined
waiting for the next excuse me roundabout
disorderly speeding entry and exit;
farting exhausts add to the ambience
of furious delay,
all sorts of imagined incursions
of assumed priorities,
valued expected space.
These are the beasts of burden
with their armchair promises
of fleeting fulfilment.
The herds will move on
to graze and moan alone in the crusher's yard
killer squeezed at the end of a particular dream,
bones broken unceremoniously
while the occupants find
other fresh fields - freshen up their lives
with babies, dogs, plans for fitness
still pining for discontents.
raypool
Tue 6th Aug 2019 19:29
Hi David, thanks ! A poem that hinges on an idea that goes from mineral to animal! That road is a long one by the way.
Very kind Tommy. Glad it appealed.
Cheers Don. One that I was pleased with myself.
Thanks Mark. Yes that would be the best place to meditate while you're stuck up an exhaust pipe. Maybe they'll finally excavate that tunnel. It works well on the A3 at Hindhead.
Cynthia, Lisa, David and Devon, thank you for reading and liking.
Ray