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Culver Cliff

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Finger light

Tremble

Touching pictures of sky

August sailing clouds

Tumble billowing

Chasing curtains of rain into a cresting sea

Blackberry

Red Clover await a salted kiss

Purple Musk

Thistle dance

Anywhere dancing

Temporal feathers of life alighting

 Spin into the sun

Above

Swaying scented Sea lavender

 High upon Culver Cliff

Entwined in sweet soft  summer grass

Lovers kiss

Unchained Melody

Crooning

Crackles down to the shoreline

Breaking and sparkling

Wave over wave

 

Oh

My love

My Darling

 

◄ An Innocent Abroad ( A Soldier’s Letter to his Chaplain)

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clarissa mckone

Thu 18th Mar 2010 02:58

Hi Gus, this is so nice! xx

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Tue 16th Mar 2010 12:40

Isn't it fab to have a roll and tumble in sentimental lyricism - and you've done it so beautifully! The images and musical lines are lovely, crafted with your special skills, especially word choice. In addition to 'Unchained Melody' I could hear the strains of 'Love is a Many-spendoured Thing'. And the best part is: why not? This overflying style is 'fresh' and 'romantic' for younger generations. Give us more.

darren thomas

Mon 15th Mar 2010 16:20

I never know which way your stuff is going to turn, Gus. That's what I enjoy about it.

D

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Francine

Mon 15th Mar 2010 13:19

Mmmm...
'August sailing clouds Tumble billowing
Chasing curtains of rain into a cresting sea'...
'Swaying scented Sea lavender
High upon Culver Cliff'...
'Lovers kiss
Unchained Melody'

Exquisite imagery and sensations Gus...

xxx

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Andy N

Mon 15th Mar 2010 08:14

very wistful for you, gus.. kept expecting the smut to come in but it didn't which was a big surprise.. really enjoyed it however, m8.

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Sun 14th Mar 2010 22:20

This seems a little wistful for you Gus.
Lovely images and scents and movement.

Janet.x

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