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WHITE HORSES IN A DARKENED FIELD

 

White horses in

a darkened field

in silhouette

stand ever still

 

Phantoms in white

their presence yields

a ghostly sight

in darkened field

 

By chance we came

upon this sight

white horses in

the soft moonlight

 

Their image stays

on mind despite

long past white horses

in the night.

 

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Devon Brock

Mon 26th Aug 2019 21:32

Dk, what I find most brilliant in this poem is the inversion of the silhouettes - white against black. I get a sense of the phrase "death rides a pale horse" in this. The horses in the poem are riderless and still, as if waiting. I read this as a reflection on inevitable mortality. That is my interpretation of this wonderful poem. Thanks for this one.

D

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Mae Foreman

Mon 26th Aug 2019 15:30

I'll second Don. Nice to see you try ypur hand in other formrs I Loved it!
Thank you?
Mae

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Don Matthews

Mon 26th Aug 2019 15:21

Away from your usual style. Very nicely put dk

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afishamongmany

Mon 26th Aug 2019 14:55

Lovely piece d.k., beautiful. ><>

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