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Wintry Skies

Crisp russet leaves begin to fall

amid the early autumn squall

no more we’ll hear that clamoured call

as swallow flies

 

Each night the sun makes haste to set

tonight will be the soonest yet

while bitter breezes blow their threat

as summer dies

 

And now we barely hear a sound

as sleepy hedgehogs go to ground

in secret refuges they’ve found

and close their eyes

 

Through garden pond and flooded fen

in every forest, hill and glen

the seasons turn and cry amen

‘neath wintry skies

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Trevor Alexander

Sun 1st Dec 2019 16:31

Thanks guys. Jennifer, I don't know if it's a recognised form. It just fell that way in my head.

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jennifer Malden

Sun 1st Dec 2019 08:52

Beautiful poem! Agree about the rhyming. What poetic 'form' is it with those final four syllable lines? They give the poem great rythm and hold it together.

Jennifer

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Mon 25th Nov 2019 17:25

Good quality rhyming Trev!

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