Tue 6th Aug 2019 12:46
Unfortunately I'm lacking
a lucky charm
Also I'm lacking
a snoring alarm
With thunderous snoring
I'm fearful of harm
Unfortunately I'm lacking
a port in a storm.
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Philipos
Mon 5th Aug 2019 21:50
Thank you for commenting on Marbles Don - appreciated. There's another poem about marbles somewhere in the making - the names of different types such as glarnies, if I remember correctly. They were the best kind and I hated losing those. Costly too then. P.
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Sun 4th Aug 2019 02:54
thanks Don
for your kind comment on "Mom's Birthday".
written from my heart.
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Philipos
Sat 3rd Aug 2019 19:47
Re; Scent: nudge, nudge, wink, wink. ?
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Fri 2nd Aug 2019 13:50
not sure what you mean here.
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Thu 1st Aug 2019 00:07
"Fodder"
is food for thought!
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Wed 31st Jul 2019 03:04
age is all right-
what's scary is
the alternative.
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Tue 30th Jul 2019 10:53
have not had any grouse lately.
or
ever!
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Mon 29th Jul 2019 09:19
thanks for reading the poem,"Pulse".
your pulse should be good-
do not give in to IMpulse.
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Philipos
Sun 28th Jul 2019 18:27
Don - Splashbacks - appreciate the feedback muchly. Would add more but my PC is behaving like a tortoise waiting in a long queue. ?
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Sat 27th Jul 2019 12:21
My mind went down
a one way street
I was hit head on
by an idea
but now I am being ticketed
for operating a poem
without poetic license.
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Thank you Don for stopping by, reading and liking my poetries. This makes me so happy.
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Hi Dev and Don
I do appreciate your posts.
I may have left the back-door open in this poem.
The shape of some light, on a surface through window glass, can be fancifully described as such.
And Dev pardon my use of "To clarify" that upon retrospect came across as a rebuff - far from it. It was a genuine request to enquire.
The legs and her legs.
Cheers lads.
Tommy
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Sat 20th Jul 2019 23:38
thanks for always reading my poems
hope they don't have an ill effect
but WOL is pretty lenient
so what did you expect.
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Philipos
Sat 20th Jul 2019 23:30
Thanks for joining in the fun on 'Nuff Said' Don. ?
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<Deleted User> (9882)
Fri 19th Jul 2019 12:27
re Big Sal, DM, naughty as in.........?
Rose ?
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<Deleted User> (22158)
Mon 15th Jul 2019 14:45
Don,
Thanks for the compliment on my rant
Sometimes I rhyme, sometimes I can't
For the times in which I do
Are inspired by ones like you
Have a good day, Don!
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Sun 14th Jul 2019 22:29
Don't argue with bear
but be beware-
it growls and bites
anytime, anywhere!
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Sat 13th Jul 2019 23:52
I DID spell it "Humorous",
see my comment.
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Philipos
Fri 5th Jul 2019 01:27
Thanks for your comment about Nine Greek Muses Don. A bit of fun eh??
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<Deleted User> (22247)
Thu 4th Jul 2019 13:57
Having read mine, you know how delighted I'd be with yours!
I am so new, dare I make a suggestion? Well...You use "progress" as a noun in the second line. That requires stress on the first syllable. If you wrote the line with "progress" as a verb, you'd move the emphasis to the second syllable. Something like this: "Trying to progress,"
If I'm being gauche, I'll grovel.
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Mon 1st Jul 2019 00:00
Sat 29th Jun 2019 23:29
yawn?
was the poem that boring?
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Hi Don, it's a strange one - there's no telling which creations will resonate with people and which ones might not; it's so unpredictable but like you say, irrelevant really.
The act, the release and the creation are the key. Writing is such a rewarding creative endeavour and reading other's creations - with all their eccentricities ? - constantly surprises and engages. I really enjoy your style and voice and always keep an eye out for your work. T.
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Tue 25th Jun 2019 18:57
Sorry
I can do no better
on that poem
they can't all be jewels
most are just rocks
I find along the way.
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re 'A freedom to express'
The ability is not the right; without neither the voice nor the ability to write, the righteous are diminished. I think we are broadly in agreement. Tommy
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Mon 24th Jun 2019 11:44
I am basically a "nice" person.
but I am often misunderstood,
Like most poets I am not recognized
in my own time.
Only death will give me fame.
However I decided against it.
Once it occurs,
You can't come back from it.
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Thanks for the comment Don. I felt like that one would get more of a response, but it's always those ones which slip under the radar. They're just words. T
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Sat 22nd Jun 2019 22:53
mostly wide
Handsome?
not so much.
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Mon 17th Jun 2019 11:14
the line
about the ice chest and recliner
came to me at the end
an apt close to this funny poem
glad you liked it.
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Sun 16th Jun 2019 17:08
Thanks, Don, for commenting on my hacked haiku! I dig your work, man (including your haiku). Also, I found your Bio very relate-able (I have similar "extra help"). Looking forward to seeing more from you. Take it easy ---- J. Zane
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Thu 13th Jun 2019 22:52
yeah, can't believe people buy those $1000 + phones.
soon they will implant phones in your head.
(that way you won't lose it.)
hahaha
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Mon 10th Jun 2019 00:49
On ordering a Mouse:
next time I purchase
I'll research its purpose!
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Fri 7th Jun 2019 23:10
What is s stew
but just some mush
throw in the towel
and other stuff
quite frankly It's
a sloppy bust
I'll stick to steak
in steak I trust!
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Tue 28th May 2019 23:46
i don't go to Starbucks for coffee
I make my own.
tastes better and it's cheaper.
i don't tip myself!
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Sun 26th May 2019 13:30
your corner store is gone
along with your free biscuits.
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Mon 20th May 2019 21:53
thanks Don.
always appreciate your responses.
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Fri 17th May 2019 02:40
i hate to tell you this but
Ditz is completely imaginary
i don't really have a dog
it was just the rhyming
and the sound
that made this poem fun.
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<Deleted User> (21818)
Thu 16th May 2019 18:22
Hi Don..."social animals"Lol ....Keep those nurses laughing. Thanks for reading!??
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Sun 5th May 2019 03:04
save your sox
do not wash
keep in box
and do not toss.
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Thu 2nd May 2019 12:40
Don Matthews returns
it's been a long time,
now he is back
along with his rymes!
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Wed 17th Apr 2019 20:47
Thanks for your comment on "Lasting Love".
We all search for it.
Some are lucky enough to find it.
I'm one of them and i consider myself blessed
to have found her.
I hope you find your lasting love someday.
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Fri 12th Apr 2019 10:51
blimey - has 'things we buried in the garden' finally silenced you Don? I suspect not ?
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Tue 9th Apr 2019 19:06
what happened to Don Matthews?
if found, tell him his mother
wants him to call.
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glad you liked 'Simple Pleasures' Don - thanks very much for taking the time to comment
Ian
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Sun 7th Apr 2019 19:59
just throw the whole computer out
be done with it
write your poems on paper
trees provide!
wink.
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thanks for the comment on 'the parable' Don - glad you liked it
Ian
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Sat 6th Apr 2019 03:45
thanks for always coming back.
you are fearless!
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d.knape
Fri 9th Aug 2019 21:00
I wondered why the cat had glasses on. ?
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