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DECIMATION

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(This might come across as a bit dewy-eyed.  In fact, although I made a good living out of it for more than 20 years, for the sake of the planet and my grandchildren, I don't mourn the loss of the coal industry)

 

Around the town of Barnsley there were 30,000 men

In hey-days of their glory; that was when

They worked the local mines for coal,

Descending down a half mile hole

To scrabble like a human mole;

Life was so simple then.

 

At Grimethorpe and at Houghton Main, South Kirkby, Bullcliffe Wood

The graft was hard, conditions never good

Where no-one ever made their wealth

But dust and danger stole your health;

At best Death called for someone else

To claim their breath and blood.

 

I’ve heard it said the mining industry’s been decimated

But this descriptions truly under-stated

To “decimate” meant 1 in 10

Were killed by Roman generals when

Their legions had not fought like men;

For 9, though, Hope awaited,

 

But mining’s loss is 10 in 10, the “legion” all wiped out

And after’84 defeat a rout;

The mines would close not one by one

But by the dozens, on and on

Till Kellingley, the last, was gone;

The nation now without.

 

Around the town of Barnsley there’s no rippers any more

Nor chockmen, or coal prep lads like before;

They say that nothing ever lasts

That only old men live the past

And like pit ponies put to grass

They dream when once they’d roar.

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John Coopey

Mon 6th Jul 2020 16:48

Thankyou, Stephen.

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 1st Jul 2020 18:34

I think it comes together pretty well, John. Great read.

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John Coopey

Sun 28th Jun 2020 23:53

I think the narrative and tone suffer from chasing the form and rhyme pattern. Sometimes it comes together; this time less so.
Thanks for the Like, Greg.

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John Coopey

Sun 28th Jun 2020 17:55

Thankyou, Jennifer and Po. Personally, I thought it was a bit cold and formulaic. It didn’t seem to capture the passion I wanted to give it.
But nevertheless glad you liked it.

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jennifer Malden

Sun 28th Jun 2020 17:25

Beautifully written and food for thought.

Jennifer

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John Coopey

Sun 28th Jun 2020 16:19

It seems a paradox, MC. But times change. You only have to look at society’s attitudes towards “queer” and racist jokes, We all told them/laughed at them in the past. But it’s perfectly permissible to change our views to consider them unacceptable now. Likewise, those who demonstrated in their thousands against pit closures in the 90’s are likely now demonstrating (or have kids who are demonstrating) against dirty, unsustainable fuels.

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 28th Jun 2020 15:57

I've occasionally wondered how yesterday's furore over the closure
of mines in the UK stacks up against the ongoing obsession with
climate change and its perceived causes. These lines throw up the human cost (and its variety) as a reminder of what was lost - and, it
is now assumed by many, what is being gained as a result since then. Life is perplexing, that's for sure...with time itself so often the
ongoing court of arbitration.

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