Beyond Trying
Try, try and try again can be oh so trying
Endlessly trying, yet never really achieving
“At least I gave it a go, I tried” is wishy washy
Trying is hardly committing, whatever may be
Trying offers an opt-out clause at some point
“Giving it a try” guaranteed to disappoint
Any road to achievement in life is rarely linear
Which way forward oftentimes a little unclear
Got to keep on keeping on through pro-action
Making decisions, choices, producing reactions
Committed action taken every single day
Carrying right on whatever, the only way
Life experience changed beyond recognition
Trying left behind; living large life’s mission
deanfraserofficial@yahoo.com
Wed 23rd Dec 2020 15:20
Thanks for the feedback MC ?
I'm saying direct action towards a goal is a commitment, rather than just trying to do something. And carrying on through with that commitment until the desired result is achieved.