a childhood
Death came to the cottage,
Visited about five years ago.
Unexpected - she was only forty-two.
Left three girls and a man who couldn’t cope.
No hope.
Sometime later,
Saw him rushing down the lane in shirtsleeves.
Guessed who he was
On that freezing January night.
Something not quite right.
One day the eldest daughter sat behind me on the bus
Talking to another girl -
Somehow I felt they were not really friends.
She told tales of séances and oiuja boards
Of levitating plates and cups
And pictures crashing from the walls.
A little limelight sometimes eases pain.
She'd started to look plain.
Said she's with the grandparents now.
Dad still had the younger girls.
She worried over them.
They didn’t always get to school.
They never brushed their teeth,
Their hair was never combed,
Living in their rough-house home.
Later I heard the dad had gone to jail
An alcoholic now.
Grandparents stepped in.
Maybe it was too much for them.
Then one day walking down the lane
Two policemen stopped me,
Showed a photograph.
It was her little sister,
Not so little now,
Gone missing.
Later she was found.
Safe and sound.
I saw the oldest girl again today
On the bus.
She’s got so fat, looks middle aged.
Defeated.
She must be eighteen now I guess.
She looks a mess.
I felt cross for her.
I felt she took the rap.
Cos sometimes life is crap.
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<Deleted User> (8445)
Sun 18th Jul 2010 19:01
I really like this, Ann. The rhythm of the short sentences really do capture the sadness of the story, but also add a simple conversational tone. Beautifully written.