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ladys bedstraw

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Chewing on a filbert

Pondering and fingering

Lazing on her bedstraw

The lady thinks of love.

 

Of basting and of baking

Of dutious lovemaking

Of listening to tedious tales

The lady thinks of love.

 

A pomander of lavender

that she is loathe to squander

A noble book for reading

A cherished gift of love.

 

No more the hills to wander

She would be forced to launder

The lady thinks of duty

And the lady thinks of love.

 

She meets a fox awalking

No masculine asquarking

There’s freedom on the hillside

The lady thinks of love.

 

Her soul is priceless to her

Although her Lord might screw her

She decides upon her freedom

And the lady thinks of love.

 

For love’s a heavy burden

Unnecessary boredom

When you hear the call of freedom -

Go follow it my love!

 

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Dave Carr

Sun 11th Jul 2010 18:05

This is a great poem.
I see foxes a lot and I can't help admiring them although we've had our fallings out.
Dave

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Heather

Sun 11th Jul 2010 11:54

Gorgeous poem. I think the repetition worked really well here, you've got a good sense of rhythm and it all flows so smoothly. I wasn't sure about the third line of the second stanza, that didn't feel as strong to me but the others made it my favourite verse. The line 'Though the Lord might screw her' jerked me out of the poem for a moment, I think it was the length. Another syllable would soften it. Beautiful choice of picture, thanks for the read.

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Sun 11th Jul 2010 07:59

Beautiful poem, Ann! I also enjoyed reading it. With warmest wishes, Larisa

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Bernadette Herbertson

Sat 10th Jul 2010 20:28

Hi Ann, I love this one !( LADY BEDSTRAW ) Really enjoyed reading this..more please ! The picture of the fox is beautiful and I'm sure she would love her poem ..x x
Bernadette

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Ann Foxglove

Sat 10th Jul 2010 20:01

I met a fox this evening, out for a walk. This is her poem!

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