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Rock Star

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I look in the mirror what do I see
An old man stares back at me
I used to be young once you know 
Where the hell did the time go
I don't feel any different inside understand 
I need to grab the future with both hands

I could have been a rock star
Strutting around with my guitar
I've got the music in my head 
Words that flow enough said
Live fast die young there you are
I could have been a rock star

My first taste of rock was the Who
Hello Keith Moon how do you do
The Rolling Stones gave me satisfaction
I wanted to be part of the action
Deep Purple Black Sabbath Led Zeppelin and more
My father saying rubbish and slamming the door

I could have been a rock star
Driving around in a fancy car
Smashing up hotel rooms for fun
Getting wasted with groupies give me some
Live fast die young there you are
I could have been a rock star

I was told get a job or trade
Life is good you got it made
Study get an education my child
How I wish  that I had gone wild
Soon I will be knocking on heavens door
Wishing I had done a lot more

I could have been a rock star
Strutting around with my guitar
I've got the music in my head 
Words that flow enough said
Live fast die young there you are
I could have been a rock star

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Tom Doolan

Fri 28th Mar 2025 09:45

Many thanks Trevor & Stephen G for your comments. You are never too old to rock n roll. The Rolling Stones are still going strong. 🎸🎶🎤👍

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 28th Mar 2025 09:09

We can all dream, Tom. It's not too late, as Marla says.

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Trevor Alexander

Fri 28th Mar 2025 00:10

I coulda been a contender
forever out on a bender
much pilloried and lambasted
'cause I'm always getting wasted
all for that ten minutes of fame
and then they just forget your name.

Like this one Tom! 👍

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Tom Doolan

Thu 27th Mar 2025 07:36

Many thanks Marla for your vote of confidence. The dream is alive lol. 🎸🎶🎤😎
Thanks for likes: Holden & Red Brick Keshner 👍

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Marla Joy

Wed 26th Mar 2025 18:46

I like this one best so far. You can still be that rock star.

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