Inner Space
A seventy kilo person
is seven billion trillion atoms.
That's all, so they say.
Or is it?
What is an atom?
An atom is a nucleus
surrounded by electrons.
The atom's nucleus is a speck,
one millionth of a billionth
of its volume.
Less than a flea in a cathedral,
or an ant in a stadium,
Atoms are nothing,
they are empty, empty, empty,
we are – truly – hollow men,
whose illusory solidity is a gossamer matrix
containing mind-bogglingly vast, vacant space,
immense caverns, beyond imagining.
Inflated balloons are substantial
by comparison
With this emptiness within,
why do we not fall part?
Why do we miraculously hold together?
The reason?
Electrons have charges labeled`
‘negative’.
They ensure we cannot pass through each other
like ghosts,
How dull. I pass through you
with my mind, but more would be fun, would be
‘positive’
What then of spirit?
Why should there be a tie from I
to such flimsy, unlikely vehicles?
When I die,
my atoms will take their enormous spaces off,
looking for new company.
Good luck to them,
I hope to be busy elsewhere.
The illustration is a standard school textbook image of the atom. It is so extremely wrong in terms of scale, that words fail.
Dave Carr
Tue 16th Nov 2010 22:20
Excellent. I like the feeling of void and blankness. It also reminded me of a bit in the Hitch Hikers' Guide to the Galaxy (one of my favourite books) where the perspective vastness of the universe is mind blowingly demonstrated by comparing it to a piece of fairy cake. I think the naf atom is Helium. (I'm sure you know that) Dave