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This Virtual Life

At the moment of death

I breathe deeply and focus

on a light above

the assembled bodies

and deliver you

into the afterlife.

 

Your cloth is cut,

the cord is severed,

 

eyes are closed

and stubble shaven.

 

Flannel wipes the spittle

from your chin. 

 

Every orifice is plugged;

as much mystery

 

as I can muster

remains concealed within.

 

Sprinkle scent,

spread the shroud.

 

Count the mourners

bearing flowers.

 

You disappear beneath

the weight of others,

give or take

the occasional bump.

I'm already pregnant

once again.

◄ Riverside Inn

The War of Attrition ►

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 20th Dec 2010 18:08

I'm not sure I ever would have stretched that far - to poetry, I mean - even knowing the penchant for poetry as 'babies'. But 'as much mystery as I can muster remains concealed within' might have been a clue; it didn't make much sense in any other context. Also the title itself. Good brain teaser.

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Isobel

Mon 20th Dec 2010 13:51

I don't feel too disappointed Ray. Replace 'someone' by poem and much of my speculation makes sense.

I've never considered my poetry to have orifaces before - but yes they are like babies and releasing them is like cutting a chord - started writing one along those lines myself once but didn't finish it.

I suppose we could always resurrect when we hit the big time and get famous...

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Ann Foxglove

Sun 19th Dec 2010 17:16

Ah! Spittley stubbly poems! Makes sense now! But I think I liked not knowing what you were on about! It does explain the last verse though, very well.

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Ray Miller

Sun 19th Dec 2010 16:01

Oh well, I wanted a little mystery, but not this much!It's about the life - and death - of poems, poems posted online to be specific.

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Ann Foxglove

Sun 19th Dec 2010 15:34

The death of a parent perhaps? Poignant.

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Isobel

Sun 19th Dec 2010 14:49

This is an intriguing one Ray. I am torn in my understanding of it.

It could be about the birthing of a still born. It could be about the birthing of a live child - into a living death (if that's how one views life).
It could be about letting someone go and the fact that a life is so dispensable - so easily replaced in this burgeoning planet of ours.

I'm probably totally wrong on all counts but I enjoyed it anyway.
Isobel x

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Dave Bradley

Sun 19th Dec 2010 09:52

Intriguing and thought-provoking.

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