Beyond the Garden #6
The angel ushered him on.
Dense, impenetrable, jungle parted,
paths opened for the gleaming, smiling figure
with joyous eyes.
It did not seem real
His breath came in short pants.
The track rose steadily
It did not seem real.
A gaudy parrot flew clacking through the creepers above,
the jungle was vivid, vivid,
the angel eyes caught him and drew him
again, and again
it did not seem real.
The trees thinned.
“We have arrived” his guide said,
gesturing gracefully to the summit
The jungle lay before him.
But where before there had been chaos,
now he saw order.
Tracks of course,
and in the distance, the lazy smoke
from his cottage chimney
but everything else fitted
and was in place,
wildly in its wild wild place.
Every tree knew where it had to be,
every leaf had self-belief.
And still it did not seem real.
Without warning,
the angel touched his eyes.
He gasped and shook
as the molten fingers remade him.
Then opened his eyes.
And it was real.
And he saw that his cottage
his tidy, snug little home,
was part of the jungle.
He saw that his neat, squared-off, cultivated garden
was a jungle glade.
He shifted his gaze
and saw the jungle all his garden.
All was his, mastered and nurtured by his hand,
the cottage, the centre of a vast estate
of tamed wild fertility.
Shifted again and all was jungle,
Shifted again and all was garden.
Shifting, shifting, shifting...
shifting....
and he awoke
in his armchair
in his neat little cottage.
His cup of tea
cold beside him.
Half-dazed, dazzled and haunted
he wandered into his garden.
He stared at the dense, impenetrable jungle
over the freshly clipped privet hedge,
and said, quietly to himself
“Now where did that angel start?
That dream was no accident.
There's a path here
for finding.”
These poems flow from what pictures come. It feels like this may be the last. Did I hear "Thank heavens for that" ? Many thanks to those who have commented
Elaine Booth
Sun 6th Mar 2011 22:39
This is inspirational, Dave. I fully agree with Laura (again!) including the lines about the leaf and the angel. For me the possibility of redemption hinted at in the end is very touching. So many great themes.