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I have tasted it, second hand;

felt it rest, brushing my forehead -

outside the reach of my fingers.

 

A curtain moves; some warm whisper -

an eyelash,

paper -  the moving air -

and turns and sighs, a full smile of sleep in me.

 

Falling on the floor, a bursting heart

dreams; a font, a solid way of saying,

“this is the life that I would want.”

 

Too, gorging on written words

to find you,

put you in my life, make it significant,

I share my book with you,

and You wander somewhere, and always will,

unknown  to -

 

Oh! What characters you have been!

◄ Cerebratorium

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 14th Mar 2011 11:47

Outstanding in mood and tone, built skillfully with your revealing insights and special charm with emotive words.

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Ann Foxglove

Thu 10th Mar 2011 20:14

I love this Marianne. It is erotic and lush, yet "bookish" and esoteric. There is an intimacy I think in reading a second hand book in bed, when you don't know who held it in their hands before. Not sure if this thought has anything to do with your poem but that's what I get from it.

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Ray Miller

Thu 10th Mar 2011 19:54

Enjoyed it. The language not so extravagant as usual but still vibrant. Last line is very good. Dunno why, made me think of Jane Austen. Which is a worry.

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Gus Jonsson

Thu 10th Mar 2011 16:03

really really special love the last line especially...
Well done

Gus xx

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Isobel

Thu 10th Mar 2011 14:32

One I had to really think about - much like all of yours Marianne!

It brought to my mind the idea of living out a life through books/art - experiencing second hand the feelings we don't manage to find in real life. I think books aren't the only medium for doing this - but they are great for losing yourself in.
I enjoyed thinking about it. x

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Chris Co

Wed 9th Mar 2011 16:30

I like the opening two stanzas; a book being no less giving for being second hand and...the idea of the book resting with the reader now left in sleep is pleasant, delicate and humorous.

I like the notion of a book being shared being a precious gift, almost intimate...a beautiful idea.

Your final line highlights one of the great joys of the novel, to not only take us to other places, but to make of us something else.

Nicely thought...

My Best

Chris

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melanie coady

Wed 9th Mar 2011 11:46

aw nice hun x

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