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Endless Talk of Floods

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Consumed with talk of floods
I sit watching the rain,
Dry as a bone. Outside
People are looking for places to hide.

My books all say
The human race is doomed,
The end is above us
Like clouds hanging over an afternoon.

The television oracles agree
The world will end soon.

There's footage of houses
Uprooted, floating like boats,
Graphs depicting tectonic plates,
Shifting tides
And strange radioactive winds.

I too am sharpening my pencil,
Watching the cloud formations
And the circling of birds
Ready for the immanent downpour.

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Elaine Booth

Mon 21st Mar 2011 21:17

I loved the understated way your poem addresses the horrific recent events. "I too am sharpening my pencil" is superb - pen mightier than the sword and all that.

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Tom Harding

Sat 19th Mar 2011 13:14

Many thanks for the kind responses. I would say this poem was quite hastily written but I Liked the idea behind it. Not sure I ever finished it right.

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Isobel

Thu 17th Mar 2011 20:55

A strong poem Tom. I'm not quite sure what Cynthia means by her toss off comment but I agree with her on the 'circling of birds'. It kind of reminds me of birds of prey, which would tie in with Ray's interpretation. As poets, we do feed of human tragedy - often our own tragedy - it's the nature of the beast.

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Ray Miller

Thu 17th Mar 2011 20:43

Nice poem, this is an interesting line:I too am sharpening my pencil

Seems to take the line that all catastrophes are grist for the journalistic and poetic mills. Which is a point well made - if I read it right!I am sharpening my pencil might be even better.

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Julian (Admin)

Thu 17th Mar 2011 18:38

Magnificent, Tom. very well wrought. I have just one question: did you mean immanent or imminent?

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Thu 17th Mar 2011 14:59

I think this is terrific, with its 'Biblical' overtones and slippery allusions. 'the circling of birds' is full of suggestion, a great poetic skill. I believe this is a poem well-thought out and assiduously worked on for its finesse. If it's a 'toss-off', I give up.

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