watering mother
Too frail for a flannel now
she stands beneath a peal of rain.
Her daughter wields the watering can.
The water has to be just right -
elbow-measured. In this way
the tables turn, mother becomes child.
There’s a delicacy, feeling safe,
now privacy has gone. She’d thought
that seeing mother naked
would be wrong.
But, carers are dismissed
and as the water kisses grey
and sunken flesh it’s a last rite,
an honour for the daughter,
who is watering her mother.
A naked mother turning
lifts her face up like a flower.
Nearing the end, come to a time
when even water hurts.
Isobel
Wed 18th May 2011 20:50
Read this a while back and liked it Ann but didn't have time to comment properly - my life a bit busy at the moment.
I like the delicate plant imagery in here. I find it touching and sad - I like poetry that moves me in some way - don't give me nature - give me emotions! You've obviously hit the mark for many. We are are all somewhere in this life chain - marching towards the inevitable - a touching reminder of that - let's hope we all have those kind hands when push comes to shove. xx