Every cloud
Our promise of a
red moon rising,
eclipsed by clouds,
we opened
a bottle of wine
and observed
the kitchen spotlights
through half-full,
rose-tinted glasses.
Comments
ha - did this spring from the undewhelming lunar eclipse tother night? We sat watching through our own rose-tinted glasses. Saw bloody nowt!
Red moon rising - lovely line
yeah the trouble with silver linings is, there's always a cloud...
I like this, Dave. cheers.
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Cate Greenlees
Sun 19th Jun 2011 19:43
I really liked this Dave, a change from your performance humorous ones but effective in a simple way.
Cate xx