Girl in a summer dress
Girl in a summer dress
The park is tinder dry and brittle-bone,
wraith clouds wither in the Wedgewood blue
oblivious you lie there all alone
while all the world stops turning – just for you.
Wandering pages of some other place
in leopard shade of genuflecting trees,
the lake strews shimmering diamonds on your face,
your wheat-field hair a sanctuary for the breeze.
The sun’s tongue licks the ice-cream of your skin
and strips you bare to silhouette and line;
an innocence inviting carnal sin
- enigma of all feminine design.
You’ve yet to learn the power of your spell;
to hold men, helpless, over heaven - and hell.
Ray Miller
Wed 13th Jul 2011 22:52
Nice poem, Anthony. I like "leopard shade". I thought "the lake..." was a bit long - the lake shimmers diamonds upon your face?
This is a lovely line:
your wheat-field hair a sanctuary for the breeze?
Though I'd prefer just "for breeze" lose "the".