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Hippies

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At war with war

in love with love

cheerfully suspicious

of crap from above.

 

Believing in peace

Chasing the vibe

Turning on, dropping out

becoming a new tribe.

 

Changing the world

and how things run

by blowing your mind

and having fun

 

No status or suits

they wanted unity.

To hell with respectability

it's about community

 

Playing gentle tunes

They were funny

ignoring careers

and making money

 

Looking East

making things grow

hanging out, being real

enjoying the show.

 

Fashionable to laugh

at all that these days.

Many sold out, stoned out

It was just a phase.

 

But being a real one

That was tough

I just hung round the edges

A long-haired scruff

 

Can't join in the sneering, though.

The cynic's dismissive wave.

The true hippies were heroes.

Idealistic and brave.

 

They paid a price for freedom,

for openness and sharing.

The real ones deserve respect.

It was fun and it was daring.

 

What they did was full of life.

Good people now who are tiring

Might draw strength from looking back

Some hippies were inspiring.

◄ Nurikabe

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Elaine Booth

Thu 17th Nov 2011 21:51

Love the sentiment, Dave and the gentle tone of your poem. Be good to hear this. X

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Lynn Dye

Tue 15th Nov 2011 17:49

Hi Dave, been having pc probs, so missed this one. Very much enjoyed it, brings back memories!
Also belated thanks for commenting so kindly on my anti Halloween poem. x

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Andy N

Sat 12th Nov 2011 11:05

good stuff, dave as always.. really enjoyed the full of it - keep em coming.. hope you are good

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Isobel

Mon 7th Nov 2011 22:32

Nice original poem Dave. I like the way you make a distinction between the true hippies and the fringe ones - the ones who sold out.
Yes - peace loving, kind people yet most of us would worry like hell if our kids became one...

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John Coopey

Sun 6th Nov 2011 20:09

Right on an' outta sight!
Good to see you still wearing the clothes, Dave.

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Jon

Sun 6th Nov 2011 15:19

Haha! Some of my best mates at college were what some would class as 'hippies'.Best natured people I ever met! Enjoyed this dave! Be nice to hear it at The Tudor,maybe?

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Sun 6th Nov 2011 13:36

I agree with the sentiment!We need revolutionaries, people who challenge the status quo, xx

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Ann Foxglove

Sun 6th Nov 2011 09:00

Agree with the sentiments Dave - nice poem. But wouldn't the hippies be tuning in rather than turning in - or were they tired hippies? (All that dope no doubt!)

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