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Carol Ann Duffy under fire for courtroom poem

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Poet laureate Carol Ann Duffy, who only last week was basking in the glow of her latest collection The Bees winning the Costa poetry prize, has now come under fire from some quarters for her poem written in the aftermath of the conviction of two men for the 1993 racist murder of Stephen Lawrence. 

Published in the Guardian last Saturday, the 14-line poem, called simply Stephen Lawrence, attracted criticism from blogger Guy Stagg on the Daily Telegraph website. Under a headline, Is This The Best She can Do?, he wrote of the poem: “It’s bitty, unsatisfying, and a little nonsensical.” On the London Review of Books website, Ian Patterson called it “embarrassingly bad”.  Others of course disagreed. The criticism raises the issue of what poet laureates should write about. Should they stick to commenting on royal occasions – or, like Duffy, find it impossible to ignore moments of real national importance, such as the Stephen Lawrence trial?   

Another poem about Stephen Lawrence that has arguably had more impact than that of Duffy’s is Dean Atta’s I am Nobody’s Nigger, which began as an update on Facebook and post on Twitter. In five days his poem had over 15,000 hits and gave him 1,000 extra followers on Twitter. He said in a Guardian interview: "Watching Panorama, where they reconstructed his murder, and hearing that the N-word was the last thing they said when they stabbed him really struck a chord with me."

Atta, 27, who studied English and philosophy at Sussex University, and was president of the African Caribbean Society, revealed that his method of composition was probably different to that of Duffy’s, too. "I recorded it on to my iPhone, and it was straight online. I tweeted it and it just went viral." The poem begins: "Rappers, when you use the word 'nigger' remember that's one of the last words Stephen Lawrence heard, so don't tell me it's a reclaimed word."

 

 

 

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 12th Jan 2012 14:51

Joy - these things happen unfortunately. In a slightly different vein, I once had a scriptread at a major Hollywood studio. It wasrejected but a couple of years later one of their films appeared with a dozen similarplot points. Plagiarism or coincidence - takeyour pick.
Your own poem is a good example of how things can happen and leave a lingering feeling of "Hmmm".

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Antony Owen

Thu 12th Jan 2012 10:45

Graham makes an interesting point.

Regardless of what people think of CA Duffy's poetry I think she is right to reflect the times we live in. Poetry is not a parlour game and should not devalue itself with pomp and ceremony but with reflecting the times we live in. Our next generation may be ashamed of ours for many reasons and CA Duffy is doing the right thing. I read the poem and think I understood why she wrote it with such accessibility. I think she wrote in a way that would serve poetry best in the bigger picture. Far too many people are indifferent to poetry because it does not move them. An empathatic connection is better than a poets poem for purists that ticks a box. CA DUffy is thinking outside the box and fair play to her.

On the poem itself - I found it poignant and it will be judged over time and not just the present.

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Anthony Emmerson

Wed 11th Jan 2012 23:08

I don't think that the Stephen Lawrence case was just "one case of murder," given its implications and repercussions not only for the Police force but also for society. Duffy's poem, whilst not being lyrically grandiose, reflects that with suitable poignancy and gravitas.

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Joy France

Wed 11th Jan 2012 23:03

I jokingly said that CAD stole my poem. Some people took me literally! I meant that this (below) were my notes for a possible poem, and they are not dissimilar - I am not comparing myself to her... just miffed cos I also wrote one about the icelandic volcano one day, and the next morning she was on the radio reading hers which had some almost identic lines lol.... See what you think. Some similarities?


Double your life lived passed
before your mother could mourn.
False hope
of conviction.
Her conviction that truth will out.
Held. Fast.
Long time.
You.
Murdered.
Lay. longtime
Cold.
Reduced to sound bites.
Microscopic fibre, speck revealed
truth
The sharp cut of a mother’s love overcomes all.
Except loss of her son.

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Dave Bradley

Wed 11th Jan 2012 15:03

I like the poem too, though take the point about celebrity. CAD clearly couldn't write a poem for every murder victim in the country, so she has written one (and a very good one) for the murder that has had the nation's attention. Isn't that the sort of thing a Poet laureate is meant to do? It must involve being influenced by our celebrity culture and media shenanigins. There's no easy way round that, except maybe balancing writing about the headlines with writing about obscure events and people as well.

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Val Cook

Wed 11th Jan 2012 14:25

As a mother myself I feel this short poem speaks volumes.

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Isobel

Wed 11th Jan 2012 13:28

Well we are all entitled to our opinions MC. Like Winston says, the poem has got us all talking. How many past Poet Laureate poems have done that?

I don't think CAD was profiting from a high profile murder case. I think that she was probably just deeply moved by imagining what that mother had gone through. Perhaps you would have to be a woman to get it and I'm not having a go at men for that. I think many of us are just wired differently.

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 11th Jan 2012 13:19

This is a "celebrity" type of poem, making
something of one case of murder among many
that go unreported and unsolved. For that reason alone I disregard it.


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Isobel

Wed 11th Jan 2012 12:38

I like her poem. Leaving race out of it, I can identify with any mother's quest for justice - and that is what the poem is about. The death of the officer at Broadwater was tragic and sickening but it isn't topical - Stephen Lawrence is - he was just an innocent boy going about his daily life.

I love poetry that means something, that makes you feel - this poem does.

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Graham Sherwood

Wed 11th Jan 2012 12:18

First of all, I am no fan of Ms Duffy's work. That said I think that she should be allowed to write about anything she chooses. As to quality, taking WOL as an example, we are all allowed to be variable in our output.
For me the biggest problem is the matter of the position itself. A Royal Laureate is what it is, outdated and meant to be sycophantic.
I am afraid CAD will become like most of the England football team managers, subsequently wishing she hadn't taken the job in the first place. I bet the sherry is crap too!

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 11th Jan 2012 11:48

Is Ms Duffy contemplating writing some lines about the officer hacked to death at Broadwater Farm and whose killers have yet to be brought to justice?

One was laid low by a single blow,
The other dismembered as the evidence will show;
The death of one - a voice for community,
The death of the other - a silent impunity.

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winston plowes

Wed 11th Jan 2012 11:41

The Guardian has made the poem available on line here -
http://www.guardian.co.uk/books/2012/jan/06/carol-ann-duffy-stephen-lawrence

Of course as is stated above some will like it some not, others will fall in the middle. Stepping away from the subject for a moment is this not the job of the Poet Laurieate also: To Write words that question and challenge not just our views but how we interact and feel about poetry. and on a wider topic still does the very discussion of a poem make it a piece of art? In other words does the discussion and debate become part of the piece and how it is perceived?

Oh yes... I like it.

Win.

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