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Slow Bombs

Words going off as slow bombs,

smouldering explode growing over days,

words that seemed first so small and

harmless.

Little seeds but they fester and grow

in the womb of the head,

in the mind, in the brain, latch on to pain,

swell then birth

deeds foul or petty.

Havoc-words I call them.

Insidiously inserted inside contentment.

Eloquent, whispering worm-weevils

gnawing at good sense,

ignoring reason and restraint,

failing in their calling,

mauling the man

they're meant to serve.

Words as cancer

brood in the night.

Words as canker,

words as blight

 

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Chris Co

Wed 21st Mar 2012 17:25

Dangerous things- words.

Or at least they can be, depending upon how they are used and equally how they are received.

Thoughtful...

My Best

Chris

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Yvonne Brunton

Mon 5th Mar 2012 00:06

Great stuff. words as with so many tools have the power to create or destroy.love your 'worm weevils' and 'havoc words' Just a thought - how about the power of silence?

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John Coopey

Sun 4th Mar 2012 21:51

Thoroughly enjoyed this, Dave. I think it's a Venus and Mars thing but men seem more guilty of nurturing these little weevils by not talking about them, whereas women can't bloody stop!
Smack me in the mouth when you next see me but...
I was less happy with the rhyming end.

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Andy N

Sun 4th Mar 2012 18:33

like the reputation on words throughout the piece but top stuff all round m8

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Anthony Emmerson

Sun 4th Mar 2012 15:55

Like your thought process Dave. I think we are all guilty of underestimating the power of words - especially to hurt. Do we, as those who call their selves "poets", have perhaps a greater duty to consider the words we use and their contexts? Words, if you will, are the chosen tools of the trade; perhaps it says something about the craftsmanship when the bluntest tools are used.

This fits nicely with your discussion thread!

Regards,
A.E.

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Nick Coleman

Sun 4th Mar 2012 10:54

don't we all hate those 'whispering worm-weevils', pity we can't use a pesticide on them. Good work.

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Ann Foxglove

Sun 4th Mar 2012 09:03

Good images for those weasel words Dave! Some people can give looks that have the same effect!

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