Billy Brown
Billy Brown, you're a rogue
With your wandering eyes
And your soft, lilting brogue
And your plausible sighs....
Billy Brown, there's no doubt
This I know, certain, sure
How I've felt many a clout
And I've dodged many more
From your big, heavy fist
When the drink made you mad -
Next day, sorry, you kissed
Me, repentant and sad
How I wish I could do
What's right: stop loving you.........................
M.C. Newberry
Tue 28th Aug 2012 14:48
A tale of two fisties! Better for being terse and to the point. Great ending - tho' I might have gone for "and leave you". Purely a personal POV, you understand.
More please!