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First Class Ticket.



The lonely years spent on his own,
his romantically barren existence.
The humdrum job, the pittance pay,
he never shows resistance.
Every week he clings to hope,
by the TV screen he’s praying.
Fourteen million to one, a so slim chance,
yet he thinks this is mine for the taking.

The machine it turns, the numbers drop,
he can’t believe what he’s seeing,
six in a row, the prize is his,
and seeing is believing.
The adrenaline rush, the ecstasy,
the pass to emotional freedom,
my ship’s rolled in, he thinks out loud,
but circumstance is misleading.

He bought a first class ticket to nowhere,
paradise lost or so it seems.
A first class ticket to nowhere,
a shallow life, a handful of broken dreams.

The camera flash, the interview,
to the world his luck he’s showing.
They laughed at him, who’s laughing now?
He knows exactly where he’s going.
But the pretty gold diggers soon emerge,
they target him, and how.
His fate is sealed the die is cast,
yet he has no way of knowing.

The fancy house, the big flash car,
the world cruise tucked under his belt,
the pretty gold diggers hanging on,
how much better could he have felt?
But the rot is slowly settling in,
unseen, yet deadly it bites,
through a rose tinted glass,
there’s not a problem in sight.

He sits alone trapped by his wealth,
he wonders how he got here,
expensive clothes and vintage wine
won’t take away the pain.
The radio it stings his heart,
as he listens to the tune that’s playing,
and Lennon sings ‘money can’t buy me love’.

 

 

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David Blake

Fri 8th Feb 2013 17:21

Great piece. Nice message in it too. Lennon at the end was a nice touch.

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Ged Thompson

Sat 26th Jan 2013 23:17

I like this

Money cant buy you happiness but it can afford you a much better standard of misery.

Good one Tony

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Tina Ford

Thu 10th Jan 2013 22:54

This is great :D

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Nick Coleman

Wed 5th Dec 2012 18:40

Just wish I had the chance to sit alone surrounded by my wealth -heaven.

Real great audio

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Paul Maxey

Thu 15th Nov 2012 20:37

Hi Tony, I like this one, Ah the perils of Mammon,where did I put that lottery ticket?

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Lynn Dye

Fri 12th Oct 2012 10:10

Hi Tony, only just come across this, and have to say, I really like your song. The audio is very good, and I shall no doubt come back for another hearing. Well done.

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Isobel

Wed 10th Oct 2012 13:01

Great idea for a poem and lovely audio.

I'd definitely opt for secrecy if I won - I'd just hate for everyone to know - though it's probably hard to keep something that big secret.

I don't suppose you ever know what you'll do until you win - I do love the daydream though.

Money can't buy you love, but if you already have that in your life, it could buy you a hell of a good time!

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Hugh

Mon 8th Oct 2012 08:07

Well done Tony,the musical version was fantastic,definately a winner.

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Dave D Poet Rhumour

Mon 8th Oct 2012 03:09

Very good Tony! I'm sure we all have thoughts on how we would use a windfall, but the reality of having the cash might bring fresh thoughts... ;) Best wishes, Dave

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Anthony Emmerson

Sun 30th Sep 2012 10:18

Hi Tony,

This is an interesting take on winning "the BIG one." I often wonder, after seeing this type of headline, whether it is those who state "This new wealth won't change me" - and say they will be buying a new washing machine with their winnings, or those who go out and spend conspicuously who are the happier. I guess it depends what your dreams are. I don't necessarily think it's poverty that makes people so desperately unhappy; rather "poverty of mind." A shallow person is likely to have shallow ambitions/dreams. Now if that wealth is used to help and encourage others - the "spread a little happiness" theory if you like, the happiess is likely to be reflected. In the end we all get what we deserve.

Mind you, I wouldn't say no!

Regards,
A.E.

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Laura Taylor

Wed 26th Sep 2012 14:10

Best give it all to me then ;)

Interesting idea for a poem :)

<Deleted User> (6895)

Tue 25th Sep 2012 20:27

But Tony-
what a lovely way to be miserable!

Best regards-uz2.

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