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He knew the score

and said suicide is like hanging
up your boots when the season
is early doors. It’s going to ground
too soon, not waiting for the whistle
and refusing to play through
the pain barrier once more.
It’s not being able to look
at yourself in the mirror
because you’ve lost the dressing room.
Unbelievable, really. He went straight
past us like we weren’t there.
He was just giving us the eyes.

 

◄ Soul Music

And when we were sat in the Odeon ►

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Ray Miller

Tue 26th Nov 2013 22:05

Thanks all. What has happened in the world of cricket? More football manager-speak and though it wasn't initially my intention, I began to think about Gary Speed.

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Margaret Holbrook

Tue 26th Nov 2013 09:52

Sad, but very, very powerful.

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Dave Bradley

Tue 26th Nov 2013 08:46

As Izz says, great analogies for just losing it. It holds out the hovering threat that it could happen to any of us and leaves the reader wondering what it could be like (or possibly uncomfortably reminded of what it was like)

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Isobel

Mon 25th Nov 2013 14:26

I wonder if this one is inspired by what's happened in the world of cricket?

Great analogies for just losing it here. The important thing is what's going on behind the eyes - very sad.

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