This
Nothing like love tastes so bitter in the morning
after burning all night in your embrace,
then learning my passion has been misplaced.
I am penned into my own situation comedy
with black permanent marker,
a slack smile with no laughter.
So I no longer quake, shake, rock or roll,
I am merged with dullness and deepest grey,
I am purged of useful words to say.
On the longest day I held out for something fine,
for love not in a modern style,
another way for a while.
Then I became valium coated
and now I am asleep in a dream,
alone I weep, inside I scream.
This is nothing like love-
This is nothing.
This is-
This.
Isobel
Fri 11th Dec 2009 21:38
I'm just following Francine round when I should be doing some housework... Had to log in to comment on this - it so grabs you. I wonder just how many women could identify with this one? A wonderful poem Sian - it deals with an age old subject but grabs you like it was the first time... 'Holding out for something fine' doesn't seem like the modern way. Funnily enough I'm trying to write a poem about that at the moment - very different in style to this though and I'm not sure if I'll ever finish it - will let you know if I ever do. Thanks for this anyway. x