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MERMAID

the mermaid bobs with the rising tide

her hair gaining weight with tempted water

flotsam in a silver sun

her movements fluid in retrospect

scales      of injustice    riffled undone.

 

the ambulance throbs with pulsating light

a beacon on the scattered beach

and a stretcher is gently lowered,

the mermaids' dream just out of reach..

◄ ON SOLITARY HILL

THE PEACE POLICE ►

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 18th Sep 2015 15:30

An intriguing vignette of...suicide? accident?...and the
immediate aftermath.

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Stu Buck

Fri 18th Sep 2015 15:29

clever! nice twist in the middle taking it from fantasy to reality. also like flotsam in a silver sun, its a lovely line.

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