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MOTHER NATURE THE FLOWER SELLER

Mother Nature has arrived, the flower seller

taking up her usual pitch.

She lifts the hem of her big flouncy dress

smiling as her bulbs shallow rooted

have burst out

and we are entranced.  Her mouth opens:

      "These are my beauties, always for hire

       little darlings, hearts' desire."

White flowers, yellow flowers,

family likenesses various, gregarious,

and who could resist them in their comely bonnets

bringing forth sighs and sonnets.

Her face clouds over, words begin to form:

      "Be quick to take these delightful virgins.

       too soon they will resist the airy charms

       and go back to the earth and winter's alarms."

 

 

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Stu Buck

Wed 23rd Mar 2016 19:50

very good ray. reminds me of a line from a book i just finished by louis-ferdinand celine;

'outside the kiosk the soda-water lady seemed to be slowly gathering the evening shadows around her skirt'

not sure why but its a great book by a great author so its a compliment!

lots of beauty and wisdom here

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raypool

Wed 23rd Mar 2016 19:41

Thanks Harry and Alexandra. Very nice to be appreciated in one's efforts. Makes it all worth while.
I always sweat over my poems these days to get the best I can.

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Alexandra Parapadakis

Wed 23rd Mar 2016 18:11

I love the imagery. The interjected speech really adds voice, the rhyming also works very well

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Harry O'Neill

Wed 23rd Mar 2016 15:26

Congratulations Ray,

At last! a modern poem which actually gets some (country wench) actual beauty in it and remain stubbornly modern.

(It`s a very hard thing to do)

Even the honesty of the reminder in the last four lines!

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