Lost and found
up and down, down and up
gripping a metal detector
intent, determined, unwavering, bowed,
concentration etched into his face.
Watched by a woman leaning on the fence
impassive, silent
like him, in her fifties
waiting
They did not know I was watching
fascinated
to see what they would find
to see why it was important
to know more about this mysterious couple
After an hour, they exchanged their first brief words
He took a drink from her flask
silently, unsmiling
then plodded back to his task
I left the couple then,
my legs complaining at the long pause in their use
and took them off to the bilberries and heather
By chance I heard the end of the story
He was looking for his wedding ring
thrown in an unseeing rage.
And, extraordinary as it may seem,
he did find it.
What did he feel as the ring met his eyes?
Was it relief, was it the hunter's triumph?
Was it love, was it his Precious?
Was he glad to avoid the cost of replacement
of ring
or woman?
Did he think “found it quicker than last time” ?
Was he glad to put it on again?
What did she think, this sphinx of a spouse?
Was she glad, did she smile?
Did she say well done?
Did they hug, did they cry?
Did they say never again?
Were they happy?
I would like to think that they were happy.
jane wilcock
Sun 16th Aug 2009 18:35
Hi, thanks for your comments, funny though as I almost commented on this poem on friday! Its just a brilliant story,very funny and I am sure has a happy ending!! I was transfixed. Jane