Why beach glass reminds me of Stan
Stan could cut you
he was blunt, he was sharp
wasn't blind
he was strong, things were clear
in his mind,
his mouth-line grim
once,
as they say,
upon a time.
And once upon a time
an artery burst
and Stan was weak, and things grew dim
in his mind
almost blind
no longer blunt, no longer sharp
Brought down low
That's how it goes
But oh his wonderful smile, beaming
gentle warmth, our lives lightened
his patient good humour, glowing
at the children he once frightened
This beach glass could once cut you
it was edged, it was sharp
it was strong, it was clear
if you didn't mind
you would find
yourself with a blood-filled line
Not now.
Now it is worn, rounded, pitted,
scraped by a million grains of sand
battered by ten thousand waves
no threat to anyone
a thing to pick off the beach and smile
almost a stone
something warm to hold
and wonder at its story
Like Stan
cloudy now,
but with no edges
Steve Smith
Tue 15th Sep 2009 09:05
Thanks for everything like the layer of image on story in this poem, and of course the emotion that is the regret of mortality.
Thanks for the lead out of the maze\!
Steve Smith