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nostalgia

The other day in the supermarket

a warm small hand unexpectedly found mine

and on looking down I saw

a pair of huge brimming dark eyes..

He'd lost his Mum, he said

and could we find her, please?

We found her fairly rapidly

but not anxious in the least, so

panic passed and his world revolved again.

B ut there was a dark cloud shadow over mine

as I remembered times when I had had

a starfish hand in mine so often

and dark eyes to look into most days.

Now she never even phones.

 

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<Deleted User> (18118)

Wed 22nd Aug 2018 20:00

Poignant, beautiful.

Hannah

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jennifer Malden

Tue 14th Aug 2018 19:44

Thanks so much Ray, M C Newberry, Jane and Taylor. So glad you found something in it which appealed to you all. I had a lot of fun with my grandaughter when she was a child, but now she has other fish, mainly male, to fry. I was like that at her age too, as weren't we all?

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raypool

Tue 14th Aug 2018 18:55

The starfish hand is so poetic Jennifer, and engages the whole idea of it for me. The last line brings down the portcullis and becomes so poignant. Nice poem.

Ray

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 14th Aug 2018 17:55

Agree with Jane B.
But...
Life is what's lost as much as what's gained.
The trick is to accept and be grateful for what is. ?

<Deleted User> (19836)

Tue 14th Aug 2018 17:07

Eloquently said❤

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Taylor Crowshaw

Tue 14th Aug 2018 11:26

Jennifer we are their world for so long. I can relate so well to this poem. I am sure we are still, but life has a habit of getting in the way.?

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