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Claire

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What do you wear Claire in the morning?

What do you wear Claire last thing at night?

What do you wear Claire?

And

Would you dare Claire?

In your underwear Claire

 

Or

Doesn’t that feel right?

Would you do it just for spite

Like you did to me last night

 

You know just the right things to say Claire

Yeah, you certainly have a way Claire

About you

Don’t wanna be without you

Never gonna be without you

 

 

Would people stare Claire in the morning?

Would people stare Claire last thing at night?

Would’ya really care Claire?

Even

If they don’t play fair Claire

And

Would you swear Claire?

 

Tell them to go fuck themselves

 

Or

 

Doesn’t that feel right?

Are you clinging on too tight?

Hanging on with all your might

or

 

Doesn’t that feel right?

 

Would you put up an’ fight?

 

No

You know that wouldn’t be right

Not tonight

No not tonight

 

 

 

Your real hard act to follow

And

I know it’s a lot to swallow

 

But I love you

I keep thinking of you

 

 

In a very sexy way

Every minute of the day

Still thinking of you

I love you

 

 

You know just the right things to say Claire

Yeah, I don’t wanna waste one more day Claire

Without you

Don’t wanna be without you

Never gonna be without you

 

Take it from the start Claire

Take my broken heart Claire

Give me another chance Claire

Don’t end this romance Claire

Or

Doesn’t that feel right?

 

I don’t wanna be without you

 

Take it from the start Claire

Take my broken heart Claire

 

Take it from the start Claire

Take my broken heart Claire

 

I don’t wanna be without you

 

Never gonna be without you

Never gonna be without you

 

 

Never gonna be without you

Never gonna be without you

 

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sian howell

Tue 12th Jan 2010 20:44

The photo is a perfect match for this piece... I am sure I have seen her image before..
The changing text really keeps you on your toes which is how it should be with this edgy poem- it gave me jolts as I wondered what was coming next and I was left me wanting more. Sian X

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Francine

Sat 9th Jan 2010 02:28

This has a very sad and desperate feel to it...
I can hear the music playing in the background...

xxx

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Fri 8th Jan 2010 22:18

Hi Mr J.-This is one to take to the lav!-but bring it back again-though slightly moistened.but colourless-lol-really lovely poem Gus-our Monica was good at wailing-tee hee! ta Jonssons Lad-Stef-no x on the bottom sorry

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Cate Greenlees

Fri 8th Jan 2010 18:11

"It goes something like ...very bluesy... La la la laaaa la la la da da da" ............... I know that one!! youve missed the trala la late da out of the middle.!
Cate xx

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Ann Foxglove

Fri 8th Jan 2010 17:46

HOW do you get the text in different sizes etc? I wish I could do it! What are the magic words?

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Isobel

Fri 8th Jan 2010 16:54

Yes - I can hear the saxaphone Gus - you should try setting it to music. You might get on the jukebox then....It has the feel of song lyrics - lots of repetition. An unusual one for you in that this one actually deals with love and deprivation of it, amongst other things of course - not something I can remember you writing about before. It feels like you are looking through someone else's eyes rather than your own though. An interesting one. x

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Gus Jonsson

Fri 8th Jan 2010 16:36

It goes something like ...very bluesy... La la la laaaa la la la da da da ....lots of wailing gob horn

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