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Handle with Care

 

The word was ever,

to handle with care

the early fruit.

Apple blush;

peach perfect;

unblemished,

soft-skinned,

easily bruised.              

 

Today, trust is gone.

I may not comfort;

hold a hand;

or wipe away a tear,

without curious glances.

I can no longer touch,

But, then again,

I never touched before.

 

How can I walk

the ever-narrowed

p.c.- straightened path?

Without nurture,

the fruit may wither.

Without the hand to hold,

who knows where

the path may lead.

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Beulah

Sat 16th Jan 2010 17:29

you care too much. look to your own. now. That is true non-p.c.

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winston plowes

Sat 16th Jan 2010 01:08

Hi Steve. Missed this posting of yours till tonight. these words in your opening

The word was ever,
to handle with care
the early fruit.
Apple blush;peach perfect;
unblemished,
soft-skinned,
easily bruised.

- are so similar to those at the start of my latest blog 'On Seeing a Boy's Face' (Have a look) yet maybe you put it better / diferently? a great emotive piece this. got a lotfrom it. Win x

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Dave Bradley

Thu 14th Jan 2010 17:43

Good poem Steve - point well made. Reminded me of E M Forster's story - The Machine Stops - about a future world in which we live in isolation never touching each other - so unnatural.

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Ann Foxglove

Thu 14th Jan 2010 06:59

Thought provoking poem Steve. I like the last three lines particularly.

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gaia holmes

Wed 13th Jan 2010 23:22

a powerful and potent poem. Good, strong stuff.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Wed 13th Jan 2010 21:36

You have expressed well the sorrow of so many of us, the gut-wrenching helplessness against the 'p.c' mania.

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Isobel

Wed 13th Jan 2010 18:04

Sad commentary on our society Steve. I fear this recent paedophile scandal in a nursery school can only make the situation worse.

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