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HUNTER'S MOON

relish your dark woundings,

prime your pellets,

Check your powders,

For soon comes the hunter's moon.

 

polish your stock,

let your barrel breathe oil, 

make slick your cloth's 

preparations,

practise footfalls of stealth,

For soon comes the hunter 's moon.

 

While fen and forest

Sweat and furrow,

While fur frets

In the burrow,

Hold fast your dreams for now,

For soon comes the hunter 's moon.

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raypool

Sat 27th Oct 2018 15:21

HI folks. I've been offline for a few days. I noticed that the 24th was the so called Hunters Moon, so this is a re-posting from last year, with different readers perhaps1

Tommy, I hope that means you approved of the verse; cheers for reading.

Taylor, I'm really glad this made an impact for you. It does have a predatory furtive drift, and you rightly pointed out the less agreeable side of pursuits , thanks. Some poems resonate with our personal experiences, so it must have reached out.

Lovely comment Big Sal, thanks you. I'll check out the Witcher!

Cheers Hannah; glad that you liked it.

Hi David. Yes, you did see the very moon in question. Incredible sight and it must have been quite an event , worthy in itself of a poem I reckon. Thanks for that tale.
I actually thought it was on the 29th, but I took a photo of it yesterday, just waning (or is it waxing?)

Thanks Jennifer; I'll check that out.

Thanks for looking in, Jon and Anya.

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jennifer Malden

Fri 26th Oct 2018 18:11

Great writing. Sure you've read Robbie Burns's Wounded Hare on the same subject - makes me weep every time and his indignation at the useless maiming is palpable.

Jennifer

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Thu 25th Oct 2018 20:40

Has a classic feel to it.
A brilliant piece on a sensitive subject.

Hannah

Big Sal

Thu 25th Oct 2018 14:34

Reminds me of 'The Witcher'. Every stanza is superb, Ray.

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Taylor Crowshaw

Thu 25th Oct 2018 08:01

Ray, I was just talking with the farrier yesterday (while he pared my donkeys hooves) about the hunting season here in Ireland starting soon. How those, who profess to love and treat their horses and dogs well; then proceed to hunt down mercilessly what is virtually another dog to be torn apart and revel in the spectacle. Sorry but your wonderfully evocative poem brought forth this volley of words..❤

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Tommy Carroll

Thu 25th Oct 2018 00:11

mm Ray
I wonder
2nd line 2nd verse
holds it

Tommy

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