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Near-Death Experience

Vicarious trauma of near-death experience

Can make you wake up to existence’s transience,

And threat of decease or cessation of sentience

Can come as a bit of a shock

 

When someone who’s younger and normally healthy,

Is on an IC ward for treatment quite lengthy,

You pray she recovers and gets through it safely,

But still you will pause and take stock.

 

For all of those friends that you rarely run into,

Because they’re just there, and you’ll meet when you want to,

Take time to consider that sometime for them too,

The Reaper is coming to knock.

 

So value your friendships and take time to nurture

With care and attention, your mutual future,

For no one is ever a permanent fixture;

We’re all of us ruled by the clock.

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◄ Moaning Lisa

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raypool

Tue 20th Nov 2018 21:14

Hi Trevor. This has a sort wittiness to it due to the rhyming and metre, yet certainly is a considered and serious poem and is spot on.

Ray

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Trevor Alexander

Tue 20th Nov 2018 16:19

Thanks guys. ?

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John Coopey

Tue 20th Nov 2018 08:44

Wise words, Trev. And a good poem to boot.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 19th Nov 2018 15:11

The message is clear and well put. Time plus health = true wealth.
Seconds away! No time to delay,
Ask not for whom the bell rings;
You're in life's fight - day and night
Seeking reward for all that it brings.

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Taylor Crowshaw

Mon 19th Nov 2018 14:39

So true Trevor..thank you ?

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