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Life And Its Alternatives

Life can be shit but let's examine the alternative,

Never seeing light in the long sleep of death,

And every little bit of defiance that it takes to live,

Means you truly value every single stolen breath.

 

There will be no ever after at the end of the narrative,

Only here and now and then nothing, ever more,

And even when it's bad, it beats the stark alternative,

So squeeze out every drop until you knock upon that door.

 

So yes life can be shit, but it sure beats the alternative,

And even when you feel that the dark is all that's left,

Remember every stolen breath can lead to the superlative,

So steal as many as you can and revel in the theft.

 

 

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Mae Foreman

Fri 12th Jul 2019 10:48

Excellent as always Jason!

"Only here and now and then nothing, ever more,

And even when it's bad, it beats the stark alternative,"

and

"Remember every stolen breath can lead to the superlative,

So steal as many as you can and revel in the theft."

caught me the most! Once more a poem that could turn to a classic!
Thank you?
Mae

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jennifer Malden

Thu 4th Jul 2019 16:39

Great writing Jason - particularly liked 'every little bit of defiance that it takes to live'.

Jennifer

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Jason Bayliss

Thu 4th Jul 2019 07:11

Thank you all for commenting and liking, it is much appreciated. I do sometimes write cheerful stuff.?

J. x

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Wed 3rd Jul 2019 22:00

What a relief to read something hard-headed and life-affirming.

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Wed 3rd Jul 2019 15:23

great poem with a great punchline.








Rose ?

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Don Matthews

Wed 3rd Jul 2019 08:21

Well written Jason

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Lisa C Bassignani

Wed 3rd Jul 2019 00:36

Every day above ground is a good one. Unless you're a potato

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Jason Bayliss

Tue 2nd Jul 2019 22:41

Thanks Lisa, Dorothy and Devon for liking and commenting, and I tell you what Devon, I love that phrase, "Upside of the dirt." ?

J. x

Devon Brock

Tue 2nd Jul 2019 22:14

Yes, Jason, each day on the upside of the dirt should be fully lived, if possible. Thanks, man. I've been feeling a bit gloomy of late.

D

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