twine
If you were mine, if you were mine
they’d never see us more than half an inch apart.
No one could get a piece of paper
in between us.
There’d never be a time
when your hand was not in mine!
When I wasn’t running my fingers through your hair.
When my arm was not around your waist
and my tongue wasn’t tickling your ear.
I could always be found
unbuttoning your shirt
with quiet surreptitious fingers
and gazing into your bluebell eyes with
love love love.
If you were mine, if you were mine
we’d never ever waste the time
with niceties like conversation
or silly things like food
and drink and sleep.
Or other people.
In love I’d always keep
you close.
If you were mine, if you were mine
I’d tie you to the bedpost
with my garden twine
and scatter rose petals on you
and with comfrey and with celendine
I’d drug you ‘til you didn’t even know
that you were mine
And we’d make love
on the village green
and people would smile,
happy for what they’d seen. . . . .
If only you were mine.
Gus Jonsson
Thu 11th Mar 2010 14:43
This is the second time you have surprised me...I love the lyrically feel to this poem... once again a suggestion ..it needs a further verse or two... If you were mine... I think you know what is missing... it is a wonderful love poem after all... make it complete.
Gusxx