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Isobel

Tue 30th Nov 2010 23:16

Thanks for your comment on my poem Ann. I took your advice and read Chris's poem and link - a most unusual song - unlyrical and unpoetic words that somehow sounded musical (I mean the utube link) - that's an achievement! Thanks.

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Philipos

Tue 30th Nov 2010 14:38

Hi Ann

Much obliged for your comments on Rocket Man - greatly appreciated.

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Tue 30th Nov 2010 10:38

Mornin sniffy-I,ve got me ski,s on and me satnav round me neck,a large bag of cattylitter in me backpack-now where is this hovel...sorry-cottage, of yours? as to me poo-im...its a pikky I took from my hang glider as I soared above your 'ouse-which he -was-divebombing or indeed committing hari-kari-please look in your fireplace-put me down for a wing and a leg with stuffing! ta Coughing Gertie-get well soon! do NOT be worrying your 'blocked'little cranium about me-I,ll struggle through or pass into martyrdom! ps have changed me suicidal seagull/skylark poo-im to...oh look fer yerself! hmph!-xx-G-xx

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John Aikman

Tue 30th Nov 2010 09:23

Thanks for your kind comments on my Ghazal. It's a bit of a cheat really, I wrote it ages ago, long before WOL, it was one of my very first experiments with writing poetry. Traditionally Ghazal's are always about love..longing and separation, though that tradition seems to be slipping a bit as more folks experiment with them. I really, really was lost when I wrote it...not so lost now. : )

jx

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Mon 29th Nov 2010 21:06

Awww! me poor(old? nay lass!)Yanty! the only advice I can give you is get a beechams down yer cakehole and double up on the baby-gro,s..even if they do clash with the yellow/green mules clacking up and down the High Street-no seriously-ahem-beechams are brill(IMHO)love the snuggy fox pikky/image-ta chudgy-Mr Snifan Wilde-xxps can I have a long distance clap for doing me monthly 24 tins of cat food donation for our local sanctuary(Bleakholt)-I bung it in their bin in Asda-which neatly leads on to a related funny incident-did the same last month as they were bringing new stock in-and put it all around the donations bin-I had to climb a dirty great mountain of boxes to put the tins in-and! got bleedin trapped between two bleedin palettes of stuff(Mr Bean or wot!)to make you laugh yer phlegm up,heres another Mr Bean tale-neighbour of ours has a sloping driveway-(upwards)and was struggling to get kiddy in pram up it cos of the ice etc-so Mr Bean to the rescue! I remembered we had a log night night before and the ash pan(as in fire ashes-not meat n two veg)was full-so I scattered a huge amount of ash all over the icy slope-to my 'orror I had completely overlooked the fact that I had also been burning lots of d-i-y bits of wood etc(there is an end to this)which in turn were full of nails and screws! I spent half an hour picking all the nails/screws out of the ash,just in time before her hubby came down in his new car-otherwise..pop!..pop!..pop!..pop! not including the spare wheel-thats in the boot-I say this because you are a pedestrian and might not know..tee hee..do I get the clowns crown for my Mr Beanings? wot a plonker! you can go back to your lemsip now-tattybye! Mr St****(the last letter is 'd' ha!-xx

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Mon 29th Nov 2010 07:55

Mornin! this early-ish bird has woken up to find his worm has frozen! hope you aint been icicled too,best thing to do is sew up the 'oles in yer string vest-if yer dont hear from me in six months,please come to the ashes scattering ceremony-in your back garden-your freezingly-Mr Nastycoff-xx

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Sun 28th Nov 2010 18:52

evenin sparky the flitter'er-ta for loan of fairychops-took her from you to save her teeth! she,s told me so much about you-my god!tut tut! re title-twas an 'Honour to have her in my presence..or was it an illusion..zz..as for you being an illusion-what about the d-s and i missing off the front of that word-(ONLY JOKING)was going to title it'privilege or fantasy'-you notice I sent the 'cloud horses' to the Witches knackers yard? thanks Anniekins-Wildey the wizard-xx

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Freda Davis

Sun 28th Nov 2010 00:00

Hi Ann, I got your order. Will post it on Monday. Cheers.
Freda

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Sat 27th Nov 2010 23:10

Hi Ann-took inspiration from you to re-hash an old fairy fing-hope thou doth not mindeth! -Stef-xx

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Sat 27th Nov 2010 21:25

Hi Ann-thanx for 'Spectrum' viewing-funny you suggesting my restraint-makes a change from nutter!(jesting)I,m really grateful-Stefan-xx

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Freda Davis

Sat 27th Nov 2010 11:11

Thanks for the comment, Ann. I am trying out all kinds of how to.. methods but it is worth the effort. Ah, calendars. I need an address to send to. Simplest things would be for you to go to mooncalendar.me.uk and order that way, paying by Paypal if it suits you, or get my address off there and post me a cheque. Does the snow inspire you?

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Julian (Admin)

Fri 26th Nov 2010 12:24

Thanks for your comment about the photo Ann. One of my favourites with my granddaughter, who I miss loads when I am in France. another photo of her coming up when I get round to finishing a short piece about skipping all the way to school with her yesterday.
Regarding the comments about your garb in the photo, I am sure ther was more bustle last time I was at Hebden railway station. Cheers.

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Thu 25th Nov 2010 19:22

re the 'blockage'-send for Dynamic Rod!...oh oh oh(well,tis Christmas-ish)You,ll be back-I,ll bet me cheesecloth shurt onnit-ta me dux-xx

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Thu 25th Nov 2010 11:24

A very good morning to the best poet(by far far far!)on WOL! are you out sledging? Mr W-xx

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Andy N

Wed 24th Nov 2010 13:39

Hi Ann;

Many thanks for spotting the typo's on 'the other side'. I occasionally do miss them (advantage of my disabilities)and have corrected them..

I will have a think about the 6th stanza, but thank you for thinking it's a top poem! lol xx

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Wed 24th Nov 2010 10:58

no it was was-War and no bleedin PEACE! I remain yours with a blindfold on and earplugs in-in case you go to hordio-later Lovely-xx

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Wed 24th Nov 2010 10:51

Joke explanation for she who has been too cosseted-or is that corseted? soldier tells comrade he would rather be in bed with a book and a big busty blonde than on the battlefield-his buddy astounded that he even thinks about taking a book to bed when he has more than enough to occupy mind-(and body)remarks that the book must be a very good read that it distracts him from carnal activities-the first soldier replys who said I could read...it was supposed to impress the naughty lady....gerrit? PHEW!xx rsvp? not till me musskels bulge!

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Wed 24th Nov 2010 10:40

I nearly fell off the monkey bars in laughter at your amazing humour! indeed a stick of 'Blacky' rock-with the name Gemma all the way through-it shall remain unsucked!now my musskels need to bulge!

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Wed 24th Nov 2010 10:31

in your case sweet feline,the delete button shall only gathereth dust-f'rever! get yer ski,s ready! yours stiffly(all over)Stef on a stick-xx thou shall never gettereth on my wickly moor bahtat-enjoy your day dear friend.(monkey bars are calling-wonder if they sell jungle joose...tee hee)

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Lynn Dye

Tue 23rd Nov 2010 22:08

Thank you Ann for comments on "Space". I think it is you that are kind! Tootsies are sore so I'm off to beddybies with pain killers. xx

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Tue 23rd Nov 2010 09:18

Good morning Ann-re the virus warning-was,nt my geekiness-twas forwardededed on from someone elses clever awarenesessess-but the thought of you being electronically obliterated nearly madeded me half smile-but then being the loveable rogue I am,I thought better,and softly cursing being overtaken by my saintly side of my dual personality(there is an end to this!)I came to my senses..!-no seriously,if you can, please let other people know-hope you are sharing Mr Sunbeam with me today-enjoy!..S-xx

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Mon 22nd Nov 2010 20:26

Lettuces on crackerjack? WRONG! about as wrong as the spelling of BUSTLE! lol! 3 CABBAGES dropped and contestant was out-now you know how much of a fossil I am! Stefan...2 cabbages-

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Ann Foxglove

Mon 22nd Nov 2010 19:33

Yes indeed chaps! My bustle is completely made of varying types of lettuce! I used to be on Crackerjack you know!

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Mon 22nd Nov 2010 19:25

hey yourself john(Ann just carry on regardless)I,m so 'green' with envy at your very clever joke that you may have driven me to the hedge!(brilliant! can we have comments on joke kerwality?)this soldier on the battlefield says to comrade-I would rather be in bed with a big busty blonde and a book-comes the reply-must be some read!-first soldier-who said I can read-bum bum!-Steffal Brush-xx(payment to Ann for loan of space John-don,t worry!

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Ann Foxglove

Mon 22nd Nov 2010 18:53

Could have been worse John - could have been a rocket! (Type of posh lettuce for all you plebs out there!)

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John Aikman

Mon 22nd Nov 2010 18:43

Quote 're your poets image-how did the lady in the pik manage to get a garden to grow out of her posterior?' Quote.

Hey, Stefan, I reckon that's just the tip of the iceberg! : )Jx

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Mon 22nd Nov 2010 18:36

Dear dearie of the BUSTLE-since I recently joined the beasthood-sorry priesthood I have decided to delete all blasphemous poems and rude comments in order to be assured of a glorious entry into paradise-you can laugh-you are laughing are you not? not? oh goodbye then Mrs Chips-Father Wilde(the better)...tea hee n toast-xx

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Greg Freeman

Mon 22nd Nov 2010 14:00

It really is Hebden Bridge? That's spooky!

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Mon 22nd Nov 2010 13:34

have deleted me'otel pooim-was too naughty-I,ll explain it to you when you get older-I may have been called to the headmasters orifice-(I mean office) over it-tee hee...S+W-ps-re your poets image-how did the lady in the pik manage to get a garden to grow out of her posterior?

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winston plowes

Mon 22nd Nov 2010 10:16

Hi Ann, Yes, It is Hebden Bridge Station! Not the normal sort of passenger you get waiting for the Leeds train! Win x

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John Aikman

Mon 22nd Nov 2010 10:08

Thank you for your kind observations on my 're-mix'. I am happier with it and I think it stands up (so to speak) as a poem. It is a bit odd plagiarising ones self but oddly satisfying. I might try it again in a different form, I've already got the first line of a sonnet there! Or perhaps I should move on and find something else to write about? : )

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Greg Freeman

Mon 22nd Nov 2010 09:31

Love the new profile pic, Ann! Your going-home outfit after Hebden Bridge?

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Dave D Poet Rhumour

Mon 22nd Nov 2010 09:14

Hi Ann, thanks for your comments on 'Brimming' :) Best wishes, Dave

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Chris Dawson

Sun 21st Nov 2010 20:18

Didn't see the station. Really enjoyed that weekend though - even though there were some things I'd like to see done differently next time. Had awful come down after it - wish there was another one planned already - to look forward to.
Cx

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Ann Foxglove

Sun 21st Nov 2010 20:07

Actually, it looks just like Hebden Bridge Station!

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Chris Dawson

Sun 21st Nov 2010 19:55

So you do! Ignore it and it'll probably go away. Just be careful sitting down. Or in high winds.
xx

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Ann Foxglove

Sun 21st Nov 2010 19:50

Er - oh yes! So I have! I hope it's not like the start of the Quatermass Experiment! I seem to have some kind of bird's nesting box on my head too!

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Chris Dawson

Sun 21st Nov 2010 19:48

Erm - you seem to have some kind of bright green growth on your bustle! Hope it clears up soon
xx

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Dave D Poet Rhumour

Sun 21st Nov 2010 19:34

Thanks Ann, nice of you to miss me - I've not been quite so active on line recently, but I will try to play 'catch up' :) Best wishes as ever, Dave

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sun 21st Nov 2010 15:32

I would like to 'read aloud' on here also, but I haven't done any exploring of 'how to'. That's all; I need to get more selfish with my time. But I do enjoy reading other poets' works. So I get hung up and lose precious minutes of my 'allotted' time on Net.

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Chris Dawson

Sun 21st Nov 2010 11:14

Ta <x>
and you too petal
xx

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Chris Dawson

Sun 21st Nov 2010 11:06

Hi Ann,
Thanks for reading and commenting on 'Miles of Space Between Us' - I loved your interpretation of it. I hadn't thought of it as being about separation from my children, but when I re-read it myself in that light it made perfect sense, and could actually apply equally to many people in my life - both now and in the past. Particularly as I get older, I feel I want to hang on to the people I love a bit more - you lose people for all sorts of reasons and in all sorts of ways - and some of them leave huge holes in your life that are just not adequately filled by the cat.
Anyway - having said all that - I've actually removed the poem, but your input has been much appreciated.
Cx
Ps - the cat hates being hugged too
xx

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Gus Jonsson

Sat 20th Nov 2010 11:22

So many thanks for your comment re my 'Space' submission. I hear what you are saying about the photo ... but let me tell you the research and trawl to find a suitable graphic was wonderful.... but then I'M A MAN......

Many Thanks once again

Gus xx

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Thu 18th Nov 2010 11:07

Hi, Ann. I truly meant to contact you yesterday, but I got caught up in my oldest grandson's sixteenth birthday preparations - it IS a milestone! I don't know exactly where you live in Cornwall. I was thinking of you especially just in case you were in the flood zone.

How do you get on 'voice' for reading?

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Paul F Blackburn

Thu 18th Nov 2010 10:11

No, afraid Susan Wicks is no relation even though she has grey hair.

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Yolande

Thu 18th Nov 2010 07:21

Hi Anne
Thanks for your comment on my poem. I too am returning to the poetry scene after a period of absence and am catching up again.
Regards Yolande

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Thu 18th Nov 2010 00:55

Thanks for commenting on my Space poem. Very much appreciated.x

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Chris Dawson

Tue 16th Nov 2010 13:34

Hi Ann,
Thank-you ever so much for reading and commenting on 'Empty Space' - your comments are always appreciated.
Cx

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Freda Davis

Mon 15th Nov 2010 23:33

Thank you again, Anne. It is a funny little poem, born on a depressed morning. Not brilliant.
I find your poems like water colours, picturing detail and conveying a mood. Each one well worth reading.

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Mon 15th Nov 2010 20:15

I see what you mean. it is a huge cliches but I feel that each couplet in that is a cliches maybe. When I first wrote that poem I played about with the punctuation but it didn't seem to work in practice. On the page people seemed confused and when I read it out I left a full stop beat.

thanks for your feedback :)

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