Mon 3rd Dec 2018 12:15
liked your cat poem.
do you always talk on the banana?
try using a cell phone.
much handier.
if cats have hats
what's their excuse?
cats do have hats
blame Dr. Seuss
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Thank you for commenting on First one Last Hazel. Always valued and appreciated. Taylor ?
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Sun 21st Oct 2018 18:10
SO MUCH YOU
You look so happy in this photo
that smile is so much YOU,
We wonder what just happened
that you could be so moved,
Could it be you inherited money
or did the divorce go through?
Whatever the reason, keep smiling
that smile is so much YOU.
wink.
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Fri 21st Sep 2018 03:36
Watch out for that flock of words
flying across the page-
they may leave something behind
you will have to clean up later.
wink.
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Fri 17th Aug 2018 16:50
is that a museum you are in?
or your house?
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Thank you for reading The Feather Hazel. Isn't it wonderful how thought provoking poetry can be. ?
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Thank you for reading 'language of the trees' yes I agree and Trees are taken for granted, we walk among them and don't notice!
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Thank you for reading Her Heart Hazel. ?
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Thank you Hazel..I think I might just wear a skirt..?
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Thu 9th Aug 2018 18:04
why why do you capitalize Hazel
but not ettridge
is it a secret code
are you ashamed of your last name
IS it your REAL last name
and who is that clown?
is that the real
Hazel Ettridge
holding a banana?
?
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Thank you for reading Nan's Lippy Hazel..?
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In your profile photo
Betwixt a phallic column
And a filing cabinet
You sit salted away
Like the icicle on the edge
Of a wave.
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<Deleted User> (16099)
Sat 4th Aug 2018 14:27
thank you for the comments n the courtship poems once again you are the best of all the things in my day..
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Fri 3rd Aug 2018 11:18
Nice to meet you Hazel!
Thank you for reading my poems - Birds and Silently Sad.
I look forward to reading my way through your writings.
Jane?
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Fri 29th Jun 2018 12:55
Hi Hazel
Thank you for your recent LIKES and comments on my poems - really appreciated!!!
Cheers
DJB
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Thanks for your comments on 'there are no angels here' Hazel - I think you are right - Angels are a retiring breed
Ian
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Like Cynthia I loved your 3-line verse under your bio. Simple. Imagery perfect. Thankyou Don
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thank you for coming by that was nice.
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ah YES you totally got it Hazel ? this was an exercise in trying to create an archaic looking language to fit the archaic looking poem of a crows perspective on life. It was easily achieved using a phonetic translater - which uses emphasis on the words stresses - so reading it aloud is exactly the exercise needed to make it work - the 'translation' was more for those who simply tried to read it - rather than use the phonetics.
Glad you liked it
Ian
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Fri 18th May 2018 16:52
thank you for the comments on my poems all of them were right on the mark .. you get me and that is always a good thing between poets thank you again..
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Tue 8th May 2018 20:18
Hi Hazel, thank you for your comment on my poem.
Much appreciated.
Hannah
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Hazel - thanks for the comment. You may be interested to know that I received a note from a WOL "moderator" to tell
me my poem had been removed because it did not comply
with WOL Codes of Conduct and furthermore that WOL was
not a platform m= for my political views. I think back on what I've seen on the site and the foul, often vituperative
language used in political attacks and criticisms - and I can
only wonder at the reasoning behind this decision/action.
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thanks for your kind and thoughtful comments on 'back to the park Hazel - I'l chuffed that you liked it
Ian
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thanks for your kind comments on Eostre Hazel - I'm really pleased you liked it
Ian
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Hi Hazel, thanks for your comments re "Plans on hold".
l use "thoughts" to act as a pivotal and personal expression of what would otherwise be a too factual, impersonal account of events.
I appreciate and welcome any and all such advice.
Tommy
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Just rechecked your 'bio'. I've been enjoying your recent participation in 'Comments' on many poems. I'm not sure what you 'might call home'. Your own inimitable self?
(Have I spelled that right - too rushed to check my dic. Definitely slipping!)
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Tue 30th May 2017 12:10
Hello again Hazel - I'm more than happy with a bit of insplagiarationism! - one of the wonderful things about WoL is the way we trigger dialogue and response through poetry and commentary. So bring it on is what I say. I'm also flattered that you found favour with my Fun in a Fiat 500 - phew! It did strike me that your Earsplitting was on a similar theme when I read it. All good stuff and nothing to forgive whatsoever. All the bestest, Col.
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Mon 15th May 2017 08:54
Hello Hazel, thank you so much for your recent comments on my poems and to my profile page. Honestly, words like that floor me in the nicest way possible and I am so very grateful. Big hug. Col.
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All feedback gratefully received. I type straight onto the blog so don't usually do stanzas. But agree this one (Child) needed them.
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Jail feedback gratefully received. I type straight onto the blog so don't usually do stanzas. But agree this one (Child) needed them.
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I love the little poem under your bio. If your 'flying words land precisely', lucky lucky you. And they do. I am green with envy.
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Hello Hazel, it was your comment on Kevin´s poem ´Sylvie´which drew my attention to your profile and some of your poetry. Your style is enticing and also enigmatic. I have enjoyed most, if not all, but particularly liked Í lived my life that way´and ´The End is Nigh´. Please write more. An aspiring fan. Thanks. Keith
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thanks for your kind comment on 'devil on my right shoulder' Hazel - so pleased you liked it
Ian
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Hi Hazel. Many thanks for your comment on my latest blog entry. All I ask from myself is to evoke some feeling through my work, even if it only be in one individual. Then I know I've done my job (erm...such that it is!)
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thanks for your kind comments regarding 'Saint Hate' Hazel, I appreciate you taking the time to comment
Ian
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I so love your work. It has flavor that is easy for me to decipher. You take me on a visual ride that makes my days delightful.
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Hi Hazel, my mother has that picture up in her kitchen and it reminded me of myself in old photos, although that kid would be a few years older than me. I was born in in 1953. Anyway, I posted it as a taster from my next book After Hours out in April from Cultured Llama.
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Thankyou for the comments Hazel, they're very much appreciated!
Thanks again
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Hazel, I happened to stumble upon your profile. Call it serendipity. The universe moves in mysterious way I guess, all we have to do is be receptive.
I'd like to know more about your Mindfulness practice.
Then I would like to share my beliefs on it.
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d.knape
Fri 22nd Mar 2019 01:31
thanks Hazel.
come back soon.
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