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Criticisms

by Shirley Smothers

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The Criticisms

Crash down on me like Thunder

So tired of the Storms

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Friday 25th August 2023 4:27 pm

Criticism   Stress   unnecessary   Drama

My Poetry

by Shirley Smothers

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In writing poetry

I am a hack.

But I enjoy

writing so give

me some slack.

 

With the

comments don't

be mean, or

overly critical.

 

Please be

correct,

and please

be political.

 

 

This poem was not written

about anyone on writeoutloud.net

This is jus...

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Tuesday 2nd July 2013 8:39 am

poetry   hack   criticism

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