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Izium

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I knew this one. In different times

She could have led so many lives:

Doctor, artist, mother, teacher,

One of a band of merry wives.

 

A guess, of course. She was so young,

And now is hauled out of this pit.

Laid out for ever in a shroud;

Deprived of all her charm and wit.

 

This place concealed a tragic tale;

A savage tumult oozing waste.

Like her, each one had much to give,

But virtue has long been displaced.

 

With forks and spades we have exposed

An evil still hard to believe.

Those disinterred now fill out hearts;

In spite of anger, we shall grieve.

Ukraine

◄ High Season (Our Village Liberated)

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 20th Sep 2022 08:46

My thanks to Jennifer, John B, John C, Graham and MC for their comments.

Yes, John, the precise circumstances may be different, but this brings to mind Kaytn and so many other atrocities committed by members of our species. MC - you are right to say that they seek to escape retribution; we can only hope that those responsible will be brought to justice.

Graham - my heart goes out to the family of this poor man. It is difficult for us to comprehend the degree of suffering of the victims of this war.

And thanks to Frederick, Rose, K Lynn and Holden for liking this poem.

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 20th Sep 2022 00:34

Bringing into sharp relief the dark side of human behaviour that
acts without care for suffering and seeks to escape retribution.
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Graham Sherwood

Mon 19th Sep 2022 19:05

Stephen, all of your Ukraine work has been exceptional as already noted but this piece struck an even chillier chord today. Our next door neighbour (over the bottom fence, not physically next door) has a young woman and her daughter staying with them from Ukraine, whom we have met. My daughter who lives opposite has helped teach both some English as she is a teacher. We found out yesterday that her father sadly committed suicide last week because of what was going on in his town, Izyum.

Keep writing these valuable works Stephen.

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John Coopey

Mon 19th Sep 2022 18:19

One more voice screams underground
Beneath another burial mound.
Disgustingly redolent of Katyn.

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John Botterill

Mon 19th Sep 2022 17:57

Superbly expressed, ineffable sad as it is!

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jennifer Malden

Mon 19th Sep 2022 17:44

Tragedy so well expressed.

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 19th Sep 2022 17:32

Thanks for all the comments, Julie, Flyntland, Greg and Stephen. Yes, it is a horrifying situation and, sadly, there is probably more of the same to come. As we have said many times, there are no real winners in war - everyone comes out of it damaged. Even the perpetrators of this (who of course should be brought to justice) as diminished as human beings.

Greg- It was a pleasure to be involved and Phil was also glad to meet you and the others.

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Stephen Atkinson

Mon 19th Sep 2022 09:45

Another's powerful piece, Stephen 😢

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Greg Freeman

Mon 19th Sep 2022 08:37

Thank you for this poem, as ever, Steve. And thank you for playing your part in the launch of Poems for Ukraine the other night. It was good to meet your brother there.

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Flyntland

Sun 18th Sep 2022 19:21

hauntingly sad - well written -

"a savage tumult oozing waste"

"in spite of anger, we shall grieve"

nothing more that I can say.

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julie callaghan

Sun 18th Sep 2022 18:06

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