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We wish you all a happier new year - a plea for peace in 2024

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This has been a holiday season like no other in the long memories of some of the Write Out Loud team. Please forgive us if we were not filled with festive cheer. But you’ll appreciate that it’s difficult to remember that it was the season to be jolly, when our TV screens are filled nightly with such scenes of devastation and suffering and deaths of Palestinians in Gaza, precipitated of course by the appalling atrocities and killings inflicted by Hamas. 

At such a time of unrelenting acts without mercy we have gained some small comfort by reading the poems YOU have been posting on our site. We know Auden said: “Poetry makes nothing happen.” But in the same poem he went on to say that poetry “survives / A way of happening, a mouth.” But your passionate poems remind us that when we feel at our most helpless and ineffective, poetry can at least provide some comfort, some communal, shared compassion - to highlight that we are not indifferent to what is going on in other places as we eat, drink, and try to make merry.

By all means gather round fires with friends and family to mark the turning of the year, and be thankful that we are not suffering as others are. That of course includes those in Ukraine – and in Russia, too – and wherever there are refugees from conflict, confined and living in straitened circumstances through no fault of their own. 

We wish you all a happier 2024. 

 

This poem by Israeli poet Yehuda Amichai was published in his 1971 collection Not for the Sake of Remembering, a few years after the 1967 Six-Day War, fought between Israel, Egypt, Jordan, and Syria. In 1994, Israel’s Prime Minister Yitzhak Rabin shared the Nobel peace prize with Yasser Arafat, President of the Palestinian National Authority, and Israel’s foreign minister Shimon Peres. Amichai was invited to participate in the prizegiving ceremony, where he read this poem:

 

 

WILDPEACE

 

Not the peace of a cease-fire

not even the vision of the wolf and the lamb,

but rather

as in the heart when the excitement is over

and you can talk only about a great weariness.

I know that I know how to kill, that makes me an adult.

And my son plays with a toy gun that knows

how to open and close its eyes and say Mama.

A peace

without the big noise of beating swords into ploughshares,

without words, without

the thud of the heavy rubber stamp: let it be

light, floating, like lazy white foam.

A little rest for the wounds - who speaks of healing?

(And the howl of the orphans is passed from one generation

to the next, as in a relay race:

the baton never falls.)

 

Let it come

like wildflowers,

suddenly, because the field

must have it: wildpeace.

 

Yehuda Amichai

Translated by Chana Bloch

 

 

 

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Dave Morgan

Sun 7th Jan 2024 09:53

Julian/Greg, Anderson shelters. That's all I'm saying. Wishing you both a happy New Year.

Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Thu 4th Jan 2024 12:07

Thanks Greg and Julian for your message and for Yehuda's poem.
The lines:
"...I know that I know how to kill, that makes me an adult.

And my son plays with a toy gun that knows

how to open and close its eyes and say Mama...."

hold a particular poignance for me, having just watched a video of Palestinian children, some as young as four or five, sat in the back of a truck, pointing an imaginary gun at each other, in a game whose title was something along the lines of "who shall we shoot now?"

What future do they have when the UK's leaders make friends with murderers?

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William Alderson

Sun 24th Dec 2023 09:36

I have been campaigning to get the UK government to stop turning its back on the people of Gaza and Israel and to demand a ceasefire. I wrote the poem below out of this struggle:

My child asked for food. They said “Eat rubble”.
My child asked for water. They said “Drink dust”.
My child asked for a future. They gave her ten minutes.

She went to school, but the school was bombed.
She came back home, but her home was bombed.
She begged for peace, and they gave her silence.

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keith jeffries

Sat 23rd Dec 2023 15:26

It is heart rending to watch television night after night of scenes of destruction and mass slaughter. As poets we mourn the loss of one Gazan poet Rafeet Alareel who wrote his final poem before he and his family were all killed in an air raid. The poem is on Youtube. Dark and sinister forces are at play when all the natiions of the world call for a cease fire and only two nations refuse to act to save countless lives. Greg and Julian, all the poets of WOL may I wish you all a Christmas in which we can find peace in our hearts and pray for peace in Gaza.
Keith

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Tim Ellis

Fri 22nd Dec 2023 17:06

Thanks for sharing this fine poem, Greg and Julian. Who knows, 2024 may surprise us all and bring peace in some places that really need it. Nothing is impossible if enough people want it!

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dorinda macdowell

Fri 22nd Dec 2023 15:33

Bring Them Home

The year is entering its close
Oh Father hear our prayer for those
Whose children have been ripped away
Who face another broken day

Oh Lord let us not live in shame
Denying righteousness its name

Dorinda
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Shirley Smothers

Fri 22nd Dec 2023 15:29

Coexist
Get along,
Be compassionate
Be strong.

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raypool

Fri 22nd Dec 2023 15:18

A heartfelt poem does express how we rightly feel when confronted with the insanity of the way the world operates at a level beyond the reach of us who do not have power. Those who do have it are seldom in agreement as to how to use it and often as in the case of the Israel Palestine situation a solution could be reached but likely never will be. John Lennon said: Give peace a chance and Imagine ...... and spoke for the common man who will always suffer on the margins. Look what happened to him. I rest my case.

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 22nd Dec 2023 12:45

Thank you for this inspiring message, Greg and Julian. This poem demonstrates the power of poetry: it stops you in your tracks and fills you with excitement (because of the exhilarating writing) and hope (because of its message). By existing, it makes the world a better, more humane place. The more verse like this, the closer peace will come. Our Christmas can be joyful, providing that we never forget what is happening to so many unfortunate people.

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Robert Black

Fri 22nd Dec 2023 11:10

An appropriate and timely message of a type that I wish more would send.
I love the part of Yehuda Amichai's poem where he speaks of 'a little rest for the wounds'. There is so much turmoil in the world right now and without peace that won't change; wounds can't heal. Who amongst us has not made the observation, especially when meeting people of a different culture than our own, that 'under the skin we all want the same things'?
I've no idea what the practical answer is, but maybe just not adding to the pain of others by understanding what peace would actually look like and why cruel words are too often issued from an unrecognised position of selfish privilege is a place to start.

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Isobel

Thu 21st Dec 2023 22:56

Yes - there is so much to be sad about this year - man made sadness, together with all the fall out from natural disasters and the lottery of where you live and how you end up - trapped and with nowhere to go.

It's really hard to comment on, because everything you say sounds trite and you can't offer any solutions - only hand wringing. Putting your thoughts into poetry is one option though - at least it can be haunting and durable and not just throw away feelings.

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 21st Dec 2023 21:32

There are times when situations in certain parts of the world can give rise to feelings of "For God's sake, get a grip and get
it done!".
As for "Peace", you have to be prepared to mediate, be moderate and accommodating even if it means concessions.
It has taken some peoples centuries to achieve some sort of sensible live and let live arrangement with their immediate neighbours. The UK is one example albeit that there are, even
now, those who will never be satisfied.. No names, no pack drill.
The greater tragedy is that in a global world, the rest of humanity are remorselessly sucked into the fray c/o endless
24/7 media activity and "righteous posturing".
The candle of Peace flickers dangerously low across this old Earth when we are treated as slightly removed participants,
with all the emotive baggage that such a position seeks to
impose.
We could do with "cooler heads" for a start in you know where!
(Take your pick!"!!).

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