fear the bullet
hear the bullet
smell the bullet
see the bullet
feel the bullet
catch the bullet
own the bullet
snatch the bullet
hate the bullet
love the bullet
kiss the bullet
shove the bullet
blow the bullet
suck the bullet
know the bullet
fuck the bullet
Oh dear - maybe I'll get disqualified ;-)! I could add a couple more lines:
bite the bullet
shite the bullet!
Powerful.
And not a 'bite the bullet' in sight.
Red's always hard on the eyes - unless it's shoes of course. I also hate that pale pink colour people use now and again - anything that makes it harder to read is a turnoff. I can see what you were trying to do here though - maybe liken your words to blood?
Thanks all. With the big red writing, I guess I was going for impact - firing from both barrels maybe! I thought it was a good contrast with the black and white bullet hole image.
I really like the ferocity and aggression of this, as well as the meter. Have to say I hate the font size and colour though, sorry!
phew, ann.. straight to the point.. i wouldn't like to try to perform this one as i would get totally mixed up! lol
nice one.. x
<Deleted User> (7212)
Thu 23rd Sep 2010 22:11
do I hear my name being taken in varicose vein ?
You have expressed it so eloquently Ann!
Love it : )
xx
You've been saying fuck the bullet all through the month - glad you finally found time to love it - and suck it and blow it. You do realise you will have Banksy on your back now! I like the trajectory!
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Dave Bradley
Fri 24th Sep 2010 23:37
No need Ann. The rules say the poem has to have something, however tenuous, to do with "Biting the Bullet" and I reckon this squeezes in. However, if someone writes a poem just about biting that won't do.
It's great this writing of rules. They must have a fun time in Parliament