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Forest green bejeweled
with the call of rainbows
bedecked with coloured life.
Each separate, their quality
entwines with leaf and stem.
Still with shadow, expectant
light stitches calm water
as one by one emerald voices
curve into and below, return
to rest before the next dive.
Rich with imagination - a delight to take in!
Stella
been `0ff`
Lovely, little colourful poem
<Deleted User> (6895)
Tue 29th Nov 2011 14:27
my fave bird Stella.
As also appreciatively described in my poem
'Monarch of the river'
lovely concise poem by you.
'Forest green bejeweled
with the call of rainbows' - as lush as the scene it describes. Where is it? Can I go too?
A beautiful little poem. Like Rachel says lovely imagery.
Cate xx
Yep, nice poem, last 3 lines I like best, "curve into and below" is striking. To crib, I'd say that the 3rd line - "bedecked with coloured life" is just paraphrasing the first two - and in 10 line poems, every one counts!
Hi Stella, not sure how I missed this one! You paint such a lovely picture with a few words. Top one. :)
<Deleted User> (6315)
Tue 22nd Nov 2011 14:20
The Kingfishers hung off the branches like fairy lights...an awsome sight indeed, especially when the sun caught the colours.. thanks guys for replies :) x
top stuff, Stella.. you said a lot in two short stanzas.. excellent.. x
Enjoyed this Stella. It manages to be vivid without saying too much and restricting the reader's imagination.
Beautiful and vivid a feeling of return resonates in each dive
lovely imagery.
'light stitches calm water'..'stitches' beautiful x
'entwines with leaf and stem'..that will be me on monday, in wallasey ;)
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Hazel
Mon 16th Apr 2012 20:41
Great, Lovely images.:)