I would whisper the wind
to tangle your locks,
to tease your hair into a web
that entraps my thoughts
that entraps my
spoken wishes.
Let your hair be a
tapestry of my words
words traced as your
mouth is traced
while I whisper
those demands of you
I will lure your smile
with those fingered words
and let the Monsoon winds
whisper them back to me.
words and foto Tommy Carroll
<Deleted User> (13947)
Sun 24th Jan 2016 19:43
Breathtaking. I love "I will lure your smile with those fingered words" :)
<Deleted User> (13762)
Thu 21st Jan 2016 21:23
the words blow through the lines and whisper to us in a beautiful way
Very very nicely put Tommy. It is indeed a tapestry of words.
This is lovely Mr C! I particularly like
Let your hair be a tapestry of my words
That's a beautiful image xx
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Yvonne Brunton
Mon 25th Jan 2016 13:15
Lovely images. I love
"tease your hair into a web that entraps my thoughts"
and the alliteration of " whisper the wind".