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IN THE GARDEN - AGAIN

Sometimes it's just nice to be predictable,

let the surprising light into your shed

grab those inherited and dusty implements,

try to take nature by surprise,

ending up taking yourself seriously. 

 

It's always hard these days, penetration

of virgin soil, as old as the hills.

Thank God for the thrust of intent

at least, how the tines go in,

the back today holds up, sun playing

eye tricks in the shadows. 

 

Then of course she calls out when you

were thinking of a drink, knowing the 

hard act you have chosen.

For now and for a manageable result

you can be glad, as you take a swing

at life with those inherited and dusty implements,

as challenging as pets, no regrets. .

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◄ THE WORLD ACCORDING TO ROGER MOORE

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raypool

Tue 24th Apr 2018 21:45

HI David. Interpretation is everything! I wonder what Freud would have made of gardening? We somehow associate people of his ilk with gothic studies surrounded by books, but then that's a bit like my shed, with tools taking precedence! Cheers.

Funny you mention Monty Col, as I wrote a poem about him and Carol Klein: last line was: the parting of petals and a flash of hose. Nice to have you on board!

Well John; I should give you should some calm sound advice, but you got me beat there. You make a good case for a rest in the cloisters of the mancave. As Chas and Dave say: you have more rabbits than Sainsburys, I should give it a rest, rabbit etc.....

Mark, I tend the beds and mend the sheds. Thanks!

Thanks Martin. That's a nice thought indeed!

Hannah, I recall one poem you wrote with this theme in mind, lovely it was - your sympathies are in the right place.

Thanks Graham - I try to keep my end up, but end up knackered of course. Glad you liked it.

Suki, that is nice about the reading. I was completely relaxed doing it, always best really. I love Watcha by the way, a word not too often used these days.

Stu, thanks for bringing a discerning eye to the poem, and a seal of approval; I didn't try hard with this to be honest, sometimes that works best!

Thanks for the like Anya, appreciated.

Love to all. Ray

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Stu Buck

Tue 24th Apr 2018 11:23

brilliant ray.

on the second read i got a lot more out of it.

as im sure many did.

clever stuff

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suki spangles

Sun 22nd Apr 2018 22:27

Watcha Ray,

Gardening slap and tickle!

By the way I loved the reading and intro. Magic.

Suki

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Graham Sherwood

Sun 22nd Apr 2018 21:43

Garden poetry, a genre in itself!
Love the sexual references in V2, it really is a bit like intercourse when one is waking the soil up for the first time each year.

Spot on Ray

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Sun 22nd Apr 2018 18:41

I haven't got a garden but I remember the family garden and the garden shed.
Special days spent in the garden, our own secret world.
Loved this one.

Hannah

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Martin Elder

Sun 22nd Apr 2018 17:42

You really do love your gardening it would seem Ray. But there is a lot to be said for a man and his shed Great poem mate

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 22nd Apr 2018 16:28

I know that men have a history of love for a garden shed
But I wonder if love evolves with the storing of a bed?

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John Coopey

Sun 22nd Apr 2018 09:42

I’m plagued by bloody rabbits digging up my lawn at the minute, Ray.
I noticed for the first time this year how often I needed a breather between digging. Tempus fugit, anno domini and dominoes pizzas, I suppose.

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Sun 22nd Apr 2018 08:50

yes it's hard to avoid euphemism when writing garden themed poetry, whether intentional or not. Monty would be proud of your efforts no doubt. Enjoy a day of rest with your feet up with the Sunday papers Ray. Sounds like you earned it one way or another. Wink wink say no more. Col.

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