IN THE GARDEN - AGAIN
Sometimes it's just nice to be predictable,
let the surprising light into your shed
grab those inherited and dusty implements,
try to take nature by surprise,
ending up taking yourself seriously.
It's always hard these days, penetration
of virgin soil, as old as the hills.
Thank God for the thrust of intent
at least, how the tines go in,
the back today holds up, sun playing
eye tricks in the shadows.
Then of course she calls out when you
were thinking of a drink, knowing the
hard act you have chosen.
For now and for a manageable result
you can be glad, as you take a swing
at life with those inherited and dusty implements,
as challenging as pets, no regrets. .
raypool
Tue 24th Apr 2018 21:45
HI David. Interpretation is everything! I wonder what Freud would have made of gardening? We somehow associate people of his ilk with gothic studies surrounded by books, but then that's a bit like my shed, with tools taking precedence! Cheers.
Funny you mention Monty Col, as I wrote a poem about him and Carol Klein: last line was: the parting of petals and a flash of hose. Nice to have you on board!
Well John; I should give you should some calm sound advice, but you got me beat there. You make a good case for a rest in the cloisters of the mancave. As Chas and Dave say: you have more rabbits than Sainsburys, I should give it a rest, rabbit etc.....
Mark, I tend the beds and mend the sheds. Thanks!
Thanks Martin. That's a nice thought indeed!
Hannah, I recall one poem you wrote with this theme in mind, lovely it was - your sympathies are in the right place.
Thanks Graham - I try to keep my end up, but end up knackered of course. Glad you liked it.
Suki, that is nice about the reading. I was completely relaxed doing it, always best really. I love Watcha by the way, a word not too often used these days.
Stu, thanks for bringing a discerning eye to the poem, and a seal of approval; I didn't try hard with this to be honest, sometimes that works best!
Thanks for the like Anya, appreciated.
Love to all. Ray